...yet.

Capítulos tan cortos se sienten raros.

ok, I rarely rarely comment on an early chapter in a work that's already so far along... but that Hess rejection. just, damn. That had me laughing so hard. good job.

Ignore Guest. This story is one of the best Worm fics ever, also I agree with many of the reviews... excellent writing. Stay safe everyone!

And...she still believes Taylor is weak. Beacuse why not? She tormented her for 2 years while Taylor took it like a bitch. Then she chopped off her arms and burned and literally stomped on them. So why not? You just keep letting her win? What kind twisted fyck of a narrator are you? Just quit writing and save us the trouble.

Seriously how could you? Taylor got both her hands chopped off by Emma infront of an audience after tormented her for so long? She got to buy powers by rich daddy? More powerful than Taylor who went through for her powers? Why just fucking why? You destroyed the story for me. Taylor remains a loser after all this while Emma becomes more powerful than her? Garbage

This story was going so well, until Emma got to have powers stronger than Taylor, where she crippled her like a bitch and gets to flaunt it to her face. Taylor remains a pathetic little bozo of a loser. You should just quit writing.

You are a fucking retard. Emma gets to cut down Taylor's arms and gets to win their dual. Ofcorse, why not make her torment her a little more. Beacuse clearly 2 years weren't enough torment. Now emma gets to be stronger than her.

She's very much a saner version of the faerie queen, but then again, goblins are often either portrayed as imbacles or true masters of strategy

what am i reading, and why am i still reading it?

at some Good point but over all good but found it hard with all the Seen jump

The question's i had in chapter one never got answered. Nothing is ever answered. Nothing is ever explained. I wrote down every question and plot hole. It ended up 5 pages worth. Not a single one was ever answered. I am actualy mad that i wasted the time and energy. When you could not bother too

Parody. Reporting story as miss labeled.

and you have lost me. I kept waiting for you to get out of the funk you where in. But you have gone off the deep end with being vague and whimsical...for every single word at every single point in time! This went from an Alice in wonderland feel, to a she a crazy witch who spouts of nothing all while thinking shes all powerful...and yet is wrong EVERY TIME!.. conflicts nice and all and a "god" main character gets boring...but she cant be crazy, make zero sense (we get she does to YOU...but YOU are writing her...objectively its all hogwash that goes no where) ALL powerful, and be a 7 on the retard scale! Naive and stupid doesnt even begin to cover it...and she getting WORSE! At this point and time can you even write a normal sentence? One not a butchery of old English rammed together with a cheap rip off of Wonderland!

To be honest I ain’t familiar with the cross and I’m kinda having trouble following it with the way it’s written sometimes. I mostly started reading it because it says 148 chapters...