Awww! I love whiterose so most l was looking for a fanfic that could make me sad because l'm happy all the time thanks you please continue reading fanfic.

This was so sweet and amazing! I absolutely loved it! Amazing job!

there were misspellings but I enjoyed it.

You are so Damn goood make anotherone! please!

I will try to keep my composure, despite the... cuteness overload.
Personally, I think you're being too hard on yourself for thinking this was horrible in the first place.
The story was well done, save for some punctuation issues.
Nonetheless, I would actually like to see more of your work.
Keep up the good work.
Jethro Holmes

just marry each other you twooooooo

This was a really cute story. I had a good laugh at the turn when Weiss turned around to find Blake measuring the desk. Wow, that was awesome. Hehe. :)

Awww... That's so sweet...

That was really good, actually, I like how teasing yang was being, how supportive blake was, and how honestly grateful weiss turned out to be.

nothing seemed wrong with it, and it was a very good first attempt at a fan fiction. I'd read it again.

THAT WAS SO CUTE. I'M GONNA DIE FROM SUGAR OVERDOSE FROM HOW SWEET THIS WAS

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