Reviews for Life Edits
HeartsOfStone chapter 5 . 8/20/2014
OMG! This story is great! Please update soon.
Guest chapter 5 . 6/19/2014
Pls continue
leena456 chapter 5 . 1/26/2014
i love this story ! I look forward to reading more, especially what happens in the kitchen! )
Flor chapter 5 . 1/4/2014
CUTE! Kosei is so adorable! 3 Kinda make me wish my little bro is cute as him...*sigh* but then they hit puberty and they lose their adorableness...T.T Give me back my adorable little bro! (Srry! *rubs head sheepishly*...I rant a lot)

I get a kick out watching Jenna suffering. It makes me feel like a sadist for always being amused by her rage...Yet I sympathize with her because my big bro is like Reborn, and he is always antagonizing me.

Well enough of my ranting, hope you can continue to write this awesome and lovable piece of work!

Peace,
Flor :D
Guest chapter 5 . 10/10/2013
Ku hu hu hu! It looks like Jenna's in for a heck of a time! I like how Reborn is so sadistic! Poor Jenna has to put up with him.
YouDon'tKnowMe1306 chapter 5 . 10/6/2013
aww there's a baby chef in the kitchen, that's so cute!
Kurogane Tsubasa chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
Your stories are pretty good! I like the twist one this one where Reborn is the author and the Primo's generation is in the story. Pretty amazing.
pekapekan chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
Your writing has gotten better :)
TheParadoxicalOxymoron chapter 5 . 10/5/2013
OHONHONHON, thank you sugarbun for updating at last! /cries happy tears
At least there isn't much antagonizing going on this chapter, what a relief! ought to seek therapy and bill it under managerial expenses! That's one way to cheat the system and the best part is that she actually deserves it.
I cannot properly express my feelings for this chapter so please excuse me while I screech loudly into a bucket. "AIYEEEEEEEEE."
It really, really ought to be against the law to have this much talent in a single person. What do.
The levels of sweetness are just too dang high, gdi! My kokoro is gonna give up on me soon of you keep this up. However if the standard drops, I might just kill myself anyway.
Awww yeee, bonding shizzles goes down today! I'm quite sure this is just the delirious happiness speaking so don't mind all the crazy!
See ya round!
ParadoxMagic chapter 4 . 9/29/2013
hahaha, more please"()
YouDon'tKnowMe1306 chapter 4 . 9/24/2013
This is soooo interesting I love you. It's like i can totally feel her emotions. You're awesome!
TheParadoxicalOxymoron chapter 4 . 9/24/2013
HOW CAN THIS STORY BE SO FLIPPING CUTE AND ADORABLE. MY KOKORO CANNOT TAKE ALL THE KAWAII. THERE OUGHT TO BE A LAW AGAINST HOW CUTE YOU MANAGE TO MAKE THESE STORIES, I S2G.
On that note, I think I've seen similar concepts before. Was it from you? OuO It looks like it but my memory isn't really the best. ._."
Heehee, a lifetime of little(huge) painful thorns in the side is not good for her health. She should take yoga or something to divert all that anger. XD Jenna SMASH!
Is it weird that I don't actually want full-blown pairings in the story? I suppose cutesy fluff would be more than enough cos having just one ship destroys and sinks all the other ships. We wouldn't want that to happen now, would we? (‿)
I can't waot for the rest of the brothers to pop up randomly, annoying little prodigies they will be. Heh! I look forward to seeing more. Thank you for the chapter! /bows
blacklightningwolf chapter 3 . 9/20/2013
So funny! Love the story! Can't wait for the next chapter!
YouDon'tKnowMe1306 chapter 3 . 9/20/2013
I just read this an hour ago, then when i saw it updated, I jumped in joy then got hit by a flying book(don't know where it came from) in the library.
Panpanpan chapter 2 . 9/19/2013
This is really interesting :)
Please update soon
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