Ok i'm just gonna be honest and nitpick at this:

The pacing is erratic and all over the place, the grammar is subpar at best and eye-bleeding at worst, and holy shit, every convo and fight scene is lazily structured. The only thing did right was the behavior for the bashed characters. No offense, in all honesty, but this whole story needs a total rework and restructure. Having a beta is nice, but it's apparent they aren't doing a good job. It's sad, because this story has potential and I would like it a lot more if it weren't for the previously list issues.

This is only getting 1 out of 5 stars. I hope a remake is in progress

wtf? you cant tell him because his father many enemies? bullshit,, if yu not tell him he will confuse when people (his father enemies) want to kill him, if he know his father he wiill make more effort for his training and become strong and i am sure he wont announce to all people minato was his father

This is too rushed. Should put details.

i Robert Krause had ? on do Naruto get his mom and dad house and money others stuff be for him to get ownership of and used it too, with as for team pics on the desk is his own team with 7 his dad own and mom team now , when put the ninjas vest Jounin and his old one both in the glass case on the wall now , when Naruto had workings with abut black ops is the QM of it and when up the warring officer now , and is now commer of it now , abut black fox , then HAWL nights ,

Interesting concept and a good read but feels far to rushed almost like it is in fast forward.

la suite de naruto le rikudo sannin

Good start for this

Wait so HOW is Sasuke doing CHAKRA powered attacks? Those were supposed to be sealed away before he was sent to the prison.

Your fics are good but I am a little disappointed with the grammar and they feel rushed. Still can’t wait for the next chapter. Good work

please update

Look, i'm not gonna lie. 4 chapters in and my spine crinkled from the cringe. I have seen some bad stories with terrible pacing, but this is high on the list. I can only hope to god it improves as I read more of this.

Continu.
Pour une fois yugito n'est pas avec Naruto c'est u e fraîcheur.

Nice work!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

Keep going!