You totally have to write more chapters! That was actually pretty good, and I like the P.O.V.

Oh wow. This is really makes me realize how vulnerable all the characters are. Sometimes in the show, it's easy to forget that they're all just teens... great plot and message :D

Hey-o! I LOVE this story. You put such passion into it. It feels like I'm not reading "you" (like i feel in so many of these first-person POV's). I feel like I AM Artemis. I feel her passion.
Always keep writing. No matter how depressing this may be (in a good way), I will always remember this story.

bruh. the feels. seriously though this is absolutely awsome and you have always been amazing at capturing emotions of characters and also you write spitfire very well. you are a very talented writer.

Where's the rest?! I want more pleeze

Oh my god. This was so beautiful, so wonderfully written. I almost wish it wasn't complete, just so the magic could continue for another chapter. Bravo!

This is beautiful. The push-pull way you've written Artemis's feelings towards Wally works wonderfully with her character, and you manage to play up their insecurities really well without going overboard with them.

Sad but beautiful. Marvelous job as usual. :)

I am a mess of emotions right now and none of them are happy and I both hate and love you for that

Excellent. You really get artemis, she's hard to write convincingly, but you do it wonderfully. Great job.

So, uh, why doesn't this extremely well written cry-fest get a second chapter?

Wow... just wow.
Breathtaking. :)

Ooh, second person narrative! I feel like it's a style that not everyone can do well, but you did a great job!

Oh wow. Just wow. I cannot say much else about this except really good and it had me holding on to her feelings too...

Thats good...but I'm confused about it. And is this just a one shop or is there more chapters coming.