So painful and so good

With their dynamic of verbal vs physical of COURSE they’d be this horribly awkward

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TAP

HAHA what a twist when Peeta’s lacking sexual prowess was brought upawwww the basil move was so sweet cant wait for the rest of this already

*slaps hand on the table* THIS WAS THE CUTEST THING EVER OH MY GOODNESS BLESSED ARE WE

This turned out really cute! I felt so sorry for them at first, especially Peeta, so eager to please. I have to agree with your other reviewer about it being refreshing that he wasn't automatically super good at it right away, lol. So many authors do that. And I was glad for not too much talking. I loved how sweet Peeta was (totally in character) and how Katniss appreciated that. Glad they found their stride. Lol. They were adorable at the end. Thanks for a cute and sweet yet steamy read.

How am I just now reading this? Adorable and sexy. The tapping thing...LOL!

aaaaaah! I love this story!

Really cool story!

This was lovely! Thank you for writing it.

I loved this but I felt sorry for Peeta at most points and finally Katniss allows them to have a relationship :-)

Positively adorable!

omg that was awkward I don't think I finished any full sentences. Poor Peeta!

so funny omg i laughed so hard. so cute i think im gonna cry agh you did an amazing job

I love this story so much! Its so accurate, their characters and everything. I cant say how much i love this fic and your other stories too! I would really love to see more of your stories! This fic made me laugh so hard and cringe at some parts, it was so much fun to read!

Well, I HAVE to review this story. First of all, let me tell you that I normally avoid Peeta/Katniss stories that involve their love-making as a primary theme. Why? Because Peeta is so unrealistically perfect that it's just plain irritating. I'm not 18. I know things. I've lived a while. And though I don't know everything about men, I do know this much...sensitive, sweet guys are rarely enthralled with sex...nor are they sex gods. In fact, I think they are usually a little clumsy and awkward. Why? Because like your Peeta, they are trying way to hard. They don't take charge because they are scared they will "do it wrong." They don't quite seem to know what to do in romance or with sexual matters. So, when people write Peeta as so dang perfect in bed...especially when he's like 19 and never done it before...I'm like, "you have got to be joking!" So, I truly appreciate that you did not do that in your story. Now, I kind of doubt he'd recover this quickly from his awkwardness, but I do admit that you never turn him into "perfect." You turn him into "better" and "more comfortable." I suspect that's realistic. Peeta is a pretty unrealistic character anyway since he's "loved" the same girl since he was five. So, I'll give you that! :-) But I just wanted you to know that I think you made him more real in this way...and that's to your credit. Seriously, good job. Your writing is excellent also. Very nice style and flow in all parts...whether romance sections or just sections of the friends talking. Very nice.