| Reviews for Remembering to Breathe |
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   romagen chapter 2 . 2/3/2017 WHY WHY WHY WHY WHY?! Will Makoto keep Haru on the ship and not let him return to the sea? Will Haru ever come back to his family and friends? Is he now going to be stuck above water? What happens next?! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/15/2016 Please continue. I want to know what happens next. |
| Guest chapter 2 . 11/10/2016 Next chapter please! |
| Lotus Sword chapter 2 . 7/20/2016 Holy... I... Wow... Okay, while reading the chapter, I thought to myself that I definitely needed to mention Nagisa's hilarity in my review ("If you wear them right, they make the world blurry." Whahaha) and wonder about what happened to Rin (has he disappeared? I hope he's not caught by fishermen. And is he a merman or a shark? :D)... But damn, Dark Makoto left me speechless. I... I don't really know what else to say, other than that I'm following and favouriting this story for sure. Please update soon! It's hard to find good mermaid fictions, because tey're usually just a rendition of Disney's The Little Mermaid, if you know what I mean. This story is very original, both with the events that happen, the species of the characters (they're usually either human or merman) and the mindsets of those characters (again... Dark Makoto *shivers*). Good job! Please update soon! |
| sinfulxdaises chapter 2 . 4/23/2016 hehehehehe adorable! I really love the merman!AU since Haruka loves water so much. I really like how you depicted the story, how Makoto and Haruka seem so fascinated by one another, how all the characters are in sync with counterpart in the name, how Nagisa is still all bubbly, how Makoto and Haruka has a large age gap (mainly because they are hotter that way, or least Makoto is hotter and their relationship was been steaming hot!) HAHAHA Basically I love this story! Im looking forward to the updates! How Rin will come in, will Gou be here as well, will there be Reigisa, will there be SeiGou? I have a ton of questions! CANT WAIT for the subsequent chapters! Ik how hectic and annoying life can be but KEEP WRITING AND STAY INSPIRED I will wait all you need LET THOSE IDEAS GO WILD |
| Superwhomerlockianbookworm chapter 2 . 10/22/2015 MORE MORE MORE! |
| Dthfb2rchs33 chapter 2 . 10/12/2015 Your style of writing is a really rare! Most people wouldn't take the time to layout such description and developing plot. I really hope you will continue this even though it's been two years! |
| Guest chapter 2 . 7/31/2015 PlEASE continue the story, its awesome and I love it! |
| hislittlerobin chapter 2 . 6/12/2015 I really hope you continue this story! It would be so interesting since it works so well with Free :) |
| Guest chapter 2 . 3/7/2015 PLEASE PLEEEASE CONTINUE I love this story so much already |
| Kurage3 chapter 2 . 2/18/2015 This was a really great fic! You've abandoned it, haven't you? :( That's really too bad! I would really love to read more! (I definitely wouldn't be opposed to a new chapter, even this long after the last one) |
| Miki Mae chapter 2 . 2/17/2015 More please... |
| destiny6100 chapter 2 . 2/9/2015 Omg that was so good! I wish you would update ;-; |
| Takara yume chapter 2 . 1/4/2015 ooh, interesting can't wait to see what happens next hehe :''D |
| five-petal-rose chapter 2 . 12/12/2014 Please please please continue this! I beseech you! T-T |
