Nice. Wish you’d continue to write more Castle. Please...

Good fic

just read this again, love it even more!

sweetness

Nice

I could so see her rolling her eyes at him when he stumbled out of his pants...
You did good!

The bit with the shoes was very funny...nice blend of good feelings and romance and humor

I loved this one too. Even with the wet blanket mention that is Josh.

Too bad this episode didn't go this way. Nice job.

really enjoyed this story

D'aww, see, now that should have happened! I demand a do over!

Nicely done! You did a great job with it. It will be interesting to see how people take the infidelity part of the story. I see a very valid idea that the Kate/Josh relationship seemed almost dead in the water so this could have potentially happened. Although part of me thinks that neither Kate or Castle would have allowed it to go any further than a very passionate kiss. In saying all that, I love the idea of what you have told in your story! If only! Thanks for sharing with us. Can I beg for more 'what ifs' please? lol. You are doing an awesome job with them!

When I saw an "M" story about this ep I was beyond excited - it's one if my faves - but this is probably strong "T" at the most.

Don't get me wrong, it's a great story and you write beautifully but I was all set for some smutty LA lovin and it didn't quite make it into "M" territory - imo! I don't suppose you'd consider upping the anti just a bit, because the way you write is a pleasure to read and I think you would probably write some very good smut?

While this is really well written and kinda hot, I really struggle with the idea that Beckett would cheat. I just don't see her doing that, and as much as Castle wants her, I don't think he'd let her cheat.

I'm probably taking things way too seriously and like I said, this is very well written with an easy flow to it, but I just couldn't get past the infidelity.

Off to read your other fics now.

Loved this. Nice job