This was excellent, fantastic really, of course all of your work has been but I find this rendition of Harry a particularly fascinating one. It's a shame to see it abandoned, but you have so many other fics in progress.

They could claim split personality disorder, and then call the times when uncle Thomas takes over Tom taking over, although that might get them in trouble with Snape and Dumbledore...

But would you call this Harry brave and noble? I can’t really see these traits as being more evident than his cunning, hardworking, or intelligence. Remember, the sorting hat doesn’t rule out a house if you don’t fit into all of its traits. For example, Gregory Goyle and Vincent Crabbe are ambitious, but would you call them cunning? Unless they’re the epitome of cunning, in that they are hiding it behind a mask. You made the sorting hat rule out houses because of him not fitting in one of the traits, while he does fit the others. However, if Harry is both brave and noble/chivalrous, then it would make sense. I can never remember the second trait.

Okay, that was a bit too deep.

You write really well, but I have noticed a few grammatical mistakes over the chapters. You tend to write your sentences too long, without enough punctuation. Not all the time, just once in a while.

Good luck, and good day.

First time reading this! Fabulous story

You wrote Peirs, and it's actually spelt Piers.
Have a nice day, author!

Holy shit, this chapter was incredible. I'm so happy there's another person in the HP fandom that likes the Zhuangzi. Absolutely sublime use of the butterfly dream story!

I wonder if he appears to have multiple personality disorder to Hermione? I love their research on magic, too. I think when Harry is older, with Tom and his minds working together - they will be great.

Love this chapter!

I don't like the parallels but I understand that Harry is still a child and naive. But... it's making me hope for the best while preparing for the worst that was named canon.

Hm. I respectfully disagree and am rather irked about the choice simply because in the beginning, you foreshadowed that Harry no longer believed in blood relatives, honor, and chivalry.

Despite the slow progress, I honestly think this had a lot of potential, and I then saw that this hasn't been updated in a long time. Well. It was awesome while it lasted.

Kudos.

Not really a fan of Hermione in this story. Her whole friendship with Harry is just odd

I’m bad about not leaving reviews for fanfics I enjoy, but this one is so elegiac & beautiful. And unique. Everyone is so BELIEVABLE. Dumbledore and Snape in cannon both have IMPLIED ruthlessness...thank you for showing one that might entail, that is, dirty hands. (Sorry for the caps, there’s no italics.) I desperately hope you see your way clear to finishing this wonderful story...thanks for what there is so far.

Hey, just wanted to let you know I really enjoyed this story; although it seems to be abandoned. It was probably the most interesting take I've seen on horcruxes and the questions of identity that arise from them. Thanks for writing even though you're not following up on it anymore!