En palabras vulcanas fue... fascinante. Ciertamente entiendo la razón por la que lo señalas como estilo Grimm. Pero ciertamente no creo que deberías disculparte, yo misma como escritora cuando empecé sabiendo, como muchos niños, lo que es el dolor psicológico (no, a lo que quiera que estés pensando, sin ofender, solo pare esas ideas) por tanto mis primeras historias traían dolor a los personajes pero tenían un final feliz, porque creía en ese tipo de finales al igual que el capitán no creía en escenarios de no ganar. Con los años mi perspectiva cambió y entendí que aunque se puede perdonar, no se olvida aunque aseguremos haberlo hecho, por eso entiendo perfectamente cuando, en tus términos, una idea Disney se transforma en Grimm, por eso no me sorprendió que tomaras ese curso de acción, sinceramente en mi opinión, introducimos inconscientemente ideas más realistas de lo que creemos que pasaría en dicha situación, y también cuando estamos lo suficientemente heridos como para saber que un final feliz tomando en cuenta todos los hechos que hemos narrado, tiene una probabilidad mínima de suceder. Mis más sinceras disculpas puesto que es posible que no me haya expresado claramente.
En fin, me ha gustado mucho tu historia.

Damn, this is amazing! (as all of your Trek stories I have read so far :))
I really liked how dark it was, even though every time you delved into Spock's cold emotionless thoughts it made my insides squirm.
But the plot and your writing style are just too good to not re-read it and save it into my faves...

This is my favorite story of all time, and I'm not even a star trek fan!

I really really enjoyed this holy shit.

Loved this story. Very awesome original.

Different, so very different! The alooftness to the point of cruelty is a fascinating step in considering his character. Not sure I agree totally, but really enjoyed this thought-provoking piece of writing.

There were a *lot* of grammatical errors and typos you might want to take a look at ("a simply decision," "family Her," "say thing like that," "a very discreet guests," "Tellarite vegetarian's," lack of quote after "and perfectly healthy, lack of "in" in "he is no danger," "and it's tiny," "unfortunate,Spock," "you're physicals," "Spock wonder," "and no one one," etc.).
That said, I love the darkness you infused with the guardian spirit idea, the instincts of brutality coming in before those of tenderness. The ending was surprisingly sad, even if somewhat expected.

That was really good. :D

I enjoyed your fucked-up whatever a lot, actually.

coolest story EVER!

An interesting story...and it is true that sometimes-not often- because the light has to hit his deep set eyes at just the right angle-Leonard Nimoy's eyes are clearly amber rather than dark brown...

Fantastic! I really love what you've done with Spock's character here and his bond with Kirk. You do a brilliant job of fitting it into canon, too. Very nicely done indeed!

Squeeee! Beautiful!

Gah! Too bad they weren't a couple ah well... I still loved it!

Off-beat idea, well-executed. Thanks for the story.

...I enjoyed the fucked up whatever!
Apart from the bit where everyone died.