Huh I thought Chiron was the son of Atlas?

The point about Persephone in your ending author's notes: Allow me to point you towards a little known god known as Zagreus, son of Persephone and Hades (or I think Zeus, depending on the myth). Though I don't know if he counts, given that Dionysus' Orphic incarnation seems to have swallowed him up...

Amphitrite and Sally is my new favorite Brotp. Protecting Percy Jackson: Mom style. Also Nico was literally just ‘WHY IN TARTARUS AM I A FLOWER!’

Hah! Love this.

Oh I loved the bit in the end the most! Sally and Amphitrite..maybe you could write a bit more of that? That'd be brilliant!

This was really good!

Amazing!

Nice job, I really liked this. I especially liked Rhea's apperence. Although, (not to be a bad critic) I at first found her a little harsh to Chroin, as I usually imagine her as motherly. But after remembering when that scene took place her attitude tword Chiron makes sense. She's not allowed to have kids, but her husband is? And because she can't lash out at Kronos she takes her anger out on Chiron. I suspect in the present day Rhea keeps trying to make it up to him. (Maybe with really yummy baked goods.)

But really nice job. Hera is the worst step mom (naturally.) and everyone else felt really in character/ well characterized. (I especially liked Ariande's prank on her step kids.)

Nice! Awesome ending

I like 10, 9, and 6.

I need to read your stores more often, they are always rather nice one shots. And nice touches

Fantastic and funny. I always felt that it was more of a 'as long as I can't see them I don't mind them' thing with Amphitrite but your portrayal is much sweeter. Persephone's stories were nice too, just the right mixture of harsh and forgiving you would expect from her. Ares was a jerk of course and Aphrodite is always in favor of true love no surprises there. Rhea was the only truly unexpected one, mostly because she doesn't get any characterization in canon. Altogether this was an adorable story, the sort of cute little fic that you can read over and over again.

So 10 is bad and 1 is decent. Okay gotcha.
It was nice.

Loved it

well then.
i really like this.
especially the last one, with Amphitrite being all nice and stuff.