Reviews for Sith Gothic
Phoenix Holmes1 chapter 19 . 5/22
Please continue. Honestly I think a bit of both would be in order. I mean as a Grey Sith he'd obviously be more inclined to the Dark Side but with a complete connection to both sides of the force the Light Side should help protect his mind from the darker aspects of the Star Forge. Thus allowing him to use it as a weapon against the Galaxy's true enemy.
Abrams 1559 chapter 6 . 2/6
i really hope that you update this story it is really good and has a lot of potential.
SS5 Connor chapter 19 . 1/22
Very nice. I say keep revan alive. Found a new order. Get her pregnant. 3 children. Dark, light, and enlightened. Let revan make light side ending and shan give the kid to gothic because she goes back to no attachment. No amount of pleading will bring an update. How about some drabble? Like just write a page and post it as a oneshot?
fireball900 chapter 19 . 1/9
Best option would be to sue for peace and start a Cold War arms race.
ExS-DrIfTeRr chapter 19 . 12/8/2019
Amazing story sad that it ended like this id have rather he escaped by pretending to have fallen or perhaps have him really fall to Malak but then later be turned by Bastile to what he was before (Grey Sith?)
Right What Is Wrong chapter 5 . 6/19/2019
Essence Transfer is a perfectly functional power if you make sure there's no mind IN the present body that might throw you out. Palpatine's cloned body in Dark Empire fell apart because it had been sabotaged by a traitorous servant. If his clones had been pure, he could have happily body-hopped for the rest of eternity. (He'd also have been fine with jumping to an unborn child with enough Force potential to contain his essence.)

As with so many Sith powers, it fails only because of plot reaso... er, treacherous servants.
Right What Is Wrong chapter 4 . 6/19/2019
Hm. Have you ever played Fire Emblem 7? There's a villain who does something similar with life energy.
Right What Is Wrong chapter 3 . 6/19/2019
Nn - Sith being crazy as they are, they COULD stuff his sperm in some sort of stasis vault for a few millennia, only for Plagueis to eventually retrieve it and begin experimenting upon it, leading to Anakin's conception. Star Wars is insane sometimes.

I've never understood why Force Sensitives aren't a significant percentage of the population - 10% of men who live within the borders-of-the-Mongol-Empire-at-the-time-of-Genghis-Khan's-death have his Y chromosome. If one man can shift the genetic landscape so much due to time, circumstance, and ability, why haven't Sith Lords, far outside the bounds of normal human abilities, do the same?

So Gothic plans on becoming the Horny Sith? Well, why not. It's as sane as anything. Sion was living off his unending agony and hate (*Evanescence begins playing in the background*), Nihilius was trying to fill the hole in his soul (*more Evanescence*), and Kreia was living off her bitter angst about the Force (*even more emo music*). It will be interesting to see a Sith who's not a terminal emo.
Right What Is Wrong chapter 2 . 6/19/2019
I'm half-expecting the reveal to be that all Star Wars human males top out at two-and-a-half inches (or, worse, that the smooth-groined Ken-doll character models are anatomically correct), and Gothic's bizarre popularity is because he's a normal Earth male. :P
bavalos chapter 19 . 6/2/2019
I say that Revan is still alive. That Gothic should kill Malak, then sue for peace while fortifying and building up his empire. Change the Sith training to be slightly more grey, but still dark leaned, and make better decisions then insane dark leaders would make. He understands balance and seems decently reasonable. He could do it. Convince the group to aid him. Come clean. Raise your kids to be a strong clan of grey force users. Start a side order like the imperial knights of whatever.
Dope story though. I really do like your writing.
bavalos chapter 17 . 6/2/2019
Nice. Gotta keep the Baby Momma safe lol
bavalos chapter 16 . 6/2/2019
Another good chapter
bavalos chapter 15 . 6/2/2019
I like the sneaky Grey Sith of death actions. Funny good chapter
bavalos chapter 14 . 6/2/2019
I dig the revelation and the killing of d bags
bavalos chapter 12 . 6/2/2019
dig the emperor option. He would probably do a decent job as well. Just have to follow the evil overload list, if even a bit stringently. Already broke the kid part but that's okay. Seems to have a healthy relationship so positive there
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