Reviews for Behind Your Breath
BG224 chapter 1 . 1/6
“The ghost that passed through his soul”
uGH THATS SUCH A GOOD LINE!
This was so original, so unique, I love the concept so much. Did you create it? See a headcanon? My mind is thinking a thousand words a minute. Thank you for the read!
Slenderbrine chapter 1 . 5/11/2017
This is... weird? Interesting? I'd like more of this...
Eagle Dreamer chapter 1 . 11/17/2016
Don't take this the wrong way but that is disturbing.
abandonedaccount47 chapter 1 . 11/14/2016
"turning into a ghost that vomits up other, more malevolent ghosts scared away just about everybody"

This is probably one of the most hilarious things I've ever read.
BloodiedCoreOfHope chapter 1 . 8/26/2015
uh... what just happened? pretty awesome and all but... Danny... is the ghost portal? new. haven't seen that one before.
Ava Blook chapter 1 . 5/6/2015
Really interesting take on the Portal!Danny AU, and pretty realistically handled too. Nice writing and nice concept overall, I'd love to see more!
xThomas2 chapter 1 . 11/25/2014
Lol what
bibliophilea chapter 1 . 11/20/2014
I've never seen this AU before. I like it!
Sorrynoaccount chapter 1 . 10/1/2014
I read this again and again and it's still awesome. Danny being the portal is just so interesting and your the only person I've see write something like this. Too bad it's just a one shot I bet that their is a way to make a long plot with this idea I just can't imagine what tho. Which sucks cuz I like this. Ah well good job :D
gomen chapter 1 . 2/17/2014
wow! this is really original! is this a one shot? if not, I'd love to see the next part!
kudos!
MsFrizzle chapter 1 . 12/26/2013
This is one of the strangest AU's I've encountered. I like the way you explain things in a way that lets the reader infer additional background information.
KHGiggle chapter 1 . 12/17/2013
That would be an unfortunate side effect.
Wait. Does this mean Vlad has a similar problem?
Vitaliciouscreations chapter 1 . 11/9/2013
Jeez. Oh that's kinda gross, in the best way, and also really ironic. I love your take on it.
Phantom Ice chapter 1 . 10/28/2013
Oh man, that would really suck for poor Danny. Yet it's oddly humorous to think about. ;-)
sapphireswimming chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
How... how on earth do you come up with this stuff? These are like the most incredible original crazy but the work really well ideas I have seen in the fandom. 8D

*bows down to your prowess*

I really liked how you set this up. I was wondering exactly how things were going to be different and, wow, this was definitely different. Danny wasn't changed BY the portal, he was changed INTO the portal! And he's a ghost and he has to spit out the other ghosts when they want to come through and it's like the accident all over again as it opens and he can taste them and ohmyword how ANNOYING would the Box Ghost be then? XD

And the line about his own wikipedia page cracked me up. You... definitely have a gift for making narration and descriptions flow perfectly and in such a lovely manner to read. Thank you.
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