Glad some1 is still with this challenge.

You really need the lengthen these chapters and make it similar to the original

7 years... 7... years... come on.

Nice job with this chapter

Friggin' Civilian Council. They won't give up their evil ways.

This is a worse version of the original fanfic you're trying to base this off of;

The Elemental Casanova by reallyfreakingnerdy specifically chapter 2.

This doesn't even feel like a story rather its a summary of a story. I suggest a rewrite with your own spin not an inferior copy.

Been a while since I’ve seen this story nice job

I think you should reboot this there is so little to actually enjoy the exposition is actually far a few and when it is it's not very good no"meat" if you will and it seems it reads like your just describing events in order as you see them with out setting the scene or any of the characters have meaningful exposition for each other. Now I like the idea and I've read the original story so I think you have the potential to write this really well but all I've seen so far is pretty mediocre and now at chapter 4 I cant help but just scroll through everything and that's not something you want any of your readers to do you need to male the story more engaging. Hope you see and hear these criticisms and consider them. Thanks for reading hope you do better

Continue please

Continue please

I am looking forward to chapter 7 and Naruto needs a Shinigami Zanpakuto.

Awesome, update soon.

This story makes no sense

I am looking forward to chapter 6 and I hope Naruto gain Shinigami Zanpakuto Ryujin Jakka.

I am looking forward to 5 and I hope Shinigami give Naruto a Zanpakuto.