Well, that was ominous. I’m not freaked out at all...

I mostly loved this story, though I still hate that Renee got away with all the wrongs she did to the fairies. Any chance of a future take where supernatural karma finally catches up to her and destroys her?

So Renee was a horrible person her whole life and selfish to boot, and she is rewarded with eternal youth and happiness?! I hope the banshee finds her and guts her.

Okay that was funny! I know it shouldn't be funny, but the visual of Bella plonking onto the hard earth made me giggle.

So you've made Charlie a coward? Seriously?! In the beginning he was a strong, reasonable human who loves his daughter and now he's this?

What the hell kind of a chapter was that?

A ‘quaff of hair’ isn’t a thing. Perfectly coiffed hair is.

This is getting a bit corny.

One of my favourites...thank you for sharing your wicked mind with us

Jesus...I wish I lived in your brain...this is some weird in an otherworldly good stuff to read..lol thanks for the one direction

It’s only about an hour between Forks and Port Angeles, not three.

wait..so she just accepts edward is her mate with any questions of what a mate is or how he knows she is his mate? yea, this version of bella feels unrealistic - she goes along with everything and barely blinks. No personality.

why is bella so blase about all the crazy stuff she just learned but over reacts about her mother trying to commit suicide? it's not consistent.

this alice is funny and energetic but I love that's she is not all about clothes and superficial.

i felt like you just described an acid trip. what the heck did bella see and how?