| Reviews for Sari Broken Fall: Departure From Earth |
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  Me chapter 14 . 5/24/2016 Please update soon! It's reeeeeeeeeely good! |
 Annabell242 chapter 14 . 9/15/2015 ... |
| NightSongDragon chapter 14 . 4/20/2015 more plz :3 |
| Jazzilynn Hall chapter 14 . 4/17/2015 Sari's dead? I don't think that fall would have killed Optimus... damaged him yes, possibly quite severely, but not kill him. Sari on the other hand... even with Optimus taking the initial impact there's still the impact of her hitting his armor as he hits the water, the shock of how cold the water is, the amount of time she can actually stay underwater without need for air, and several other variables to take into account. So between Prime and Sari, it's most likely Sari that died... can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens next. |
| TheFangirlSituation chapter 14 . 4/10/2015 ...Why...why...why in the name of Primus do you do this to us!? ;-; My heart just shattered into a bajillion pieces ;-; |
| Night flight chapter 12 . 2/10/2015 Plz revive Optimus prime plz :) |
| Guest chapter 11 . 1/21/2015 OMP! You need to update! |
| Guest chapter 11 . 11/4/2014 Update soon please ? |
| Kristen Verne chapter 11 . 11/4/2014 oh my gosh... not Prime again! |
| AkatsukiKittenGirl chapter 9 . 7/27/2014 UPDATE |
| Meteor Gin chapter 1 . 5/24/2014 ? wait... what about primus? do you mean the same primus from TC? what's he got to do with anything? O.o |
| sunflaretmnt chapter 1 . 1/8/2014 this is a really awesome story cant wait for the next chapter |
| Kristen Verne chapter 8 . 12/4/2013 Good thing Sari is healing! |
| LauraP11 chapter 6 . 10/17/2013 Good story, please please post another chapter. |
| Kristen Verne chapter 6 . 10/13/2013 Wow... this just got a little funky! Can't wait for the update. |
