This is awesome. I especially like that I've never seen this idea done in Teen Wolf fic before. Yay for original ideas!

However, if I was Adria I probably would have told Scott to go screw himself after that last line of his there. I mean, seriously Scott...don't bend over backwards so far that you hurt yourself accepting the girl or anything. It isn't like she saved your life or anything...after having to defend herself against you.
Then again - it's also classically canon Scott behavior so I can't even be 'mad'. (personal opinion - Scott McCall is a hypocritical douche) I mean, this is the guy who claims "we don't kill"...yet had zero problem attempting pre-meditated murder upon Gerard Argent. And while there was never anyone who deserved to be murdered more...like I said, classic hypocritical douche Scott.

And (this is a big deal) you made me like Allison. Like a lot.
I know I'm in the minority but I might (in canon) dislike her character even more then Scott's. Her trip onto the crazy-train in Season 2 was unforgivable to me. I didn't feel she had legitimate reasons for anything she did against the wolves. Especially since it got hardcore brushed under the rug after the fact.

This story is amazing! I really love your writing skills. Especially that you're doing something new and don't rephrase the seasons. It's something you barely find here. I also love the fact that you included the winchesters. And I guess you set it around season 9 (first blade) which gives so much potential (I mean you called this story knight! Dean was practically a knight of hell. Which can crossover with the nogitsune storyline. But I know you won't do that xD) anyway. I love it. And I'm looking forward to read more. I've read this story in one day and now I'm sad because there's nothing left for me to read :(

More more more! I need more!

Love your story :)

just read this chapter and if she can take Scott so easily then aren't you making her character a little bit two powerful? It won't be a interesting story if she just takes down every enemy like that. Scotts a true alpha, the rarest Alpha out there, shouldn't that count for something?

Pretty interesting start! Me likey! A lot actually it's different. I know you wrote at the top about some grammar mistakes that you might have. If you're ever interested in having someone proofread before you post I would be willing to! The only thing I noticed was that you spell apologizing as apologising! Keep up the great work!

enjoyed your story...hope u will update soon..
also some progress in stiles/oc front would be appreciated.
keep writing

... I know how you feel. Depressed. Alone. Helpless. I literally cried for hours and hours when Allison died. Like, I couldn't even process it. We all knew somebody was going to die but I so wasn't ready for it. Not even close. And I kept telling myself that it didn't matter who it was as long as it wasn't Stiles but now that it's Allison I just want to curl up and die. I'm going to miss her so much... and her outfits! She was literally half of the things I pinned on pintrest. Anyways, onto your story. Amazing as always! Your writing is so so so good and you have this way of keeping people interested, please don't ever give up on this story! it's so good. I'm really happy with the way this chapter played out and I'm still hoping that Dean and Stiles become buddies! And Ade and Stiles need to fall in love like now! I love how Allison and Stiles went against everyone to warn Ade. I really like how you're developing their friendship, I think they could of done a lot more of that on the show (now it's too late :( ) And Cora's protectiveness over Ade is a really good touch. It always seemed like Cora was so lonely so I like her having somebody to talk to! Anyways, loving this story (Its pretty much my life right now) and I cant wait for another update, You're Killing It! And I don't know if you should change it to crossover because it took so long for Supernatural to be incorporated into it, you know? Like, maybe just mention it in the summary or something... but hey, what do I know? Do what you want girl!... But yeah, keep up the good work because i'm going to be utterly depressed until June and i NEED something to hold me over, and this is just perfection. Thank you so much for writing! :) :)

Omfg! You have no idea how much I've fallen in live with this story! And please tell me you're keeping the Winchesters in the story, even i f its only for a few chapters!

Yeah I used to be 'easythrowaway' but I was going through an identity crisis of sorts.
Banter is always entertaining, and seeing Stiles get shut down was pretty funny.
This story's pretty much become a crossover now. I would've liked a bit more description of the characters from the Supernatural universe, especially since not everyone knows who they are (myself included).
The word choices in Cora's dialogue made it seem a bit off as well (calling Stiles and Allison lackeys, or calling Stiles Scott's right hand man).

i want more of the brothers and I want Ade to have a healthy skepticism of scott. Like, don't just accept being in his pack. refuse it. challenge him to earn her trust because he hasn't. he came to save her for allison. allison - she trusts because she has earned it.

Oh, I like the crossover.
Very different, but very awesome (:

I really love Stiles' "rules when lying to werewolves". It's definitely something I can see him coming up with and it was written well. I enjoyed seeing Allison and Stiles interact as well and I hope there's more of it; it's a relationship that could have been explored more on the show. Nice tension and banter in the Stiles/Adria scene too. Can't believe you called in the WInchesters. It would've been nice to see a detailed description of them, especially from Allison's POV, and it could've doubled as a way to tease the reveal and add suspense.

Oh my God! I was not expecting that! I mean I was hoping Dean and Sam would show up but since it wasnt under crossovers I didn't think it would. Oh my God this story just got like on an entirely new level! I cant believe this chapter just ended like that, you need to update asap, like im gonna have a heart attack if I dont read the rest of this like right now... no pressure or anything. AHHH I cant even describe how freaking excited I am. Like I was just sitting here reading like 'Hmm this is pretty good' and then BAM all of the sudden I was like 'this is freaking FANTASTIC!' all because of two little lines! I'm seriously just so excited about this story now... Unless they kill her, they really cant kill her. that would just suck:( And don't even get me started on how the winchesters are going to react to the fact that there is an entire freaking pack of Werewolves just hanging out in Beacon Hills! I feel like Argent didn't think that part out to well. It's going to be really interesting to see how this all plays out and to read about how Sam and Dean react to Scott and Co. AHHH! now this story seriously has all my favorite things! Dean, Sam, and Stiles! just throw in some Harry Potter and i'll be in freaking fanfiction heaven! Oh, and your writing is really good, I cant believe I almost forgot to mention that. :) I love this! I love it I love it I love it! Now we just need Stiles and Ade to fall in love! Ps. I like it so much better when Stiles isn't the one being possessed! Anyways, love this and cant wait for you to update! I wont waste anymore of your time.

Cant get over it... Stiles and Dean in the same story :) I hope they become buddies!

I love this story it's just wow lol
I can't wait to read more

I am so excited that you are bringing Sam and Dean to Beacon Hills! As soon as Chris said that he was going to call in some back-up, I just knew who it was going to be! I can't wait to see what their reactions will be since you said that we are all up-to-date with the Winchesters. That means that they've already run into Jesse, and they wouldn't let Cas kill him because he was a good kid, so I hope they feel the same about Adria. Plus if we're in the present time-line of the Winchesters, than that means that they are kinda/sorta friends with Crowley, and he's the King of Hell so I hope they don't have that much of a problem with Adria!

Anyways, I am super excited to see where you take this story, and can't wait for the next update!

PS: I don't have any face claim ideas just yet, but I'll look for some, and if I find any good ones, I'll let you know!