Reviews for Just Breathe
COforlife chapter 2 . 7/16
So perfect!
NSFL chapter 2 . 12/23/2018
*happy sigh* thank you.
Rexwriter123 chapter 2 . 8/22/2018
I have to admit this is the first time that while reading a fanfiction that my heart stopped for a few beats then resumed then stopped for a few more AMAZING.
Supermaster51 chapter 2 . 6/1/2018
I've been waiting for see Wonderbat histories, and finally i have this. I can breathe.
Kruel'Yn chapter 1 . 5/1/2018
amazing story
Timeless Musketeer chapter 2 . 1/8/2018
Lucky me there was a second chapter because I couldn't breath myself after the first one
CammWow chapter 2 . 6/3/2017
This was so amazing. I loved how specific your description was, and how perfect you portrayed both characters, not breaking character. Thank you for writing this love one of my favorite fanfics
Closet Stalker chapter 2 . 5/30/2017
Sweet
dianaxprince chapter 2 . 8/2/2016
Beautiful
Ni Castle chapter 2 . 4/30/2015
short but good, really good
Angryhenry chapter 2 . 9/27/2014
Amazing
LaughingSenselessly chapter 2 . 7/2/2014
Beautiful!
ev23 chapter 2 . 3/10/2014
how loving best story ever!
kitcatkandy chapter 2 . 11/28/2013
This is my new favorite piece of BMWW fanfiction. You made the sex sound like it actually meant something to both of them, not like it was just a meaningless coupling. And I love your characterisation, I think you've got a really good grasp on their characters, the way they think, act and speak etc. I'd really like to read more of your fanfiction and let me just say, I'm glad you're on the BMWW side!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/20/2013
Beautiful, just beautiful.
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