Saber Lily not warning Naruto of the supernatural beings when she's sworn to protect him and, by extension, his family—yeah, no, it doesn't make sense. It's things like this that make me think whether I should continue or stop reading a story, things that make or break 'em.

First time I've ever sat and properly read your fic I believe. Think I've skimmed over it in the past a few times. Only on Chap 6 now and don't really have any complaints except these 2.

The first is that Rias is featured heavily. She is in damn near every conversation, every scene and every scenario. I don't mind Rias, I would like to see Naruto interact with other characters now and then. And by now and then I don't mean occasional things like a Koneko head pat. I mean proper interaction.

The second is this stupid concept that fear holds back power unknowingly. If he was aware of his power and nearly hurt his family, or any other reason to fear it, it would make sense. The reasons listed aren't able to justify him unkowningly holding back.

He was well aware of what he was doing when becoming a Devil so how is he afraid of being a devil? His family finding out, sure he could be afraid of that. But again, how does that in anyway hold his power back? It doesn't. If anything there potential rejection hurts him emotionally. As for other factions targetting his family, that only motivates him to get stronger. Doesn't hold him back at all.

I know it's a done deal already consider your over a dozen Chapters ahead here but the holding back power route has always annoyed me. Especially under these circumstances.

You need to give more back story at the start. The way you started it makes the readers curious what happen to the 9 tails attack or are we in another world or is this something different? I could not get through half the first chapter before calling it quits due to no info on the backstory. Good luck

I've had no real problems ready this story and I really like it but this chapter pissed me off because they say just stay in Narutos HQ because of the barrier so Koneko who knows she is a target just leaves the building to somewhere else like come on. I'm still going to keep ready because I like the story but this one thing just annoys me.

More please keep it up

update

updaye

Please update soon and add Rossweisse and Yasaka to Naruto Harem please

Please update this great story as soon as possible. It's been awhile since the last update and I really want to see what happens next

love the story line but why do they explain their new form or moves. it starting to put me off it

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why have whisker marks without kurama

why have whisker marks without kurama

wow, that is utterly fucking lame. You're just fucking rehashing canon you lazy ass. I put aside that the MC is Naruto in name only to give this a try, hoping you'd actually veer off canon sometimes.

But you didn't. You slightly altered things along the way, but when it really matters, it's just Fucking canon again. Freed probably isn't dead, and he'll probably escape, *again*, like canon. Asia's gear will be extracted before they can stop it, then she'll be brought back as a devil to save her life, just like canon.

Lame, lame, lame.

I really liked the story, the development of the characters, the fights, they are very good, I hope you continue with this fic, I will be waiting for the next chapter.