Too bad it hasn't been updated. Was getting good. :(

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It was a lot of unnecessary details but why didn't you finish it could have been a greal story

This is your first fic?! The chapters are shorter than I'm used to, but it is well written and there is already plot happening without too much fluff! I am definitely following!

Very Short Review! Sorry
I really love the way your stories is coming together.
I am really excited! (* _ )

Didn't think that Inuyasha fluffying mattress fit into the story.
I hate that Sesshomaru wasn't in the this chapter, although I was glad that Rin has finally found Dolga.

It is the same situation where she found and help Sesshomaru.
I didn't miss that. :D

I believe that the strange plant that Rin can't seem to tare herself away from is coming from above from Dolga territory.

He hate humans as much as Sesshomaru but how will he react to Rin because you know that she is going to help him.

Get ready Sessy, you now have some major competition over Rin!
Man this is getting really good.

Please Update?!
Thanks!

I really like how you took us into Dolga past. It gives us some insight into the person that he is.

It was sad when his mother died. *weeping* :(
What caught my attention is the blessing that his mother placed upon him.

Something very interesting caught my attention in that blessing!
His mother told him to learn how to "love and protect human life".

This is very similar to our "one & only" and "very hot & sexy" great dog demon, Sesshomaru! lol :D

I can see some similarities between Sesshomaru and Dolga, which I really like because this makes this story very good indeed!

Dolga hates humans just as much as Sesshomaru, he's "almost" as hot as Sessy. I can't just make him equal to Sessy, "NO WAY"!

What I like is that they are both very powerful, and beautiful and despise humans!

Dolga has had his heart broken from the death of his mom and his childhood friend whom loved him.

This is going to present some major problems to Sesshomaru when it comes to Rin!

Dolga just like Sesshomaru hate humans but there is an acception with Rin. :D

I am so thankful for the update, and the shout.
Please continue to updated because I am so excited about this story.

Update: NOW?!

I liiikkke vwry very vwerrry muucccchhh

Maybe lord Dolga is there ...

I kind of don't want to read much if it is lord Dolga there...

Update soon.

Poor Yukiji :-( but is her death really an accident? Hmmm

Glad to see an update. I wonder what will happen next. And don't worry about the details. They are fine. :)

Oh! I've read two of your stories, the other was the one-shot that I thought was connected to this story.
I've liked this one very much, although the plot is just starting to appear.
I hope you can update soooooon! cause i really want to know what else happen with the main couple of this fic!
See you!
Byee!

I can't believe what Inuyasha said! How dare he even think of something so horrible? Do he want Sesshoamru to really kill him and all those in the village? I am glad that Kagome made him sit and that she has some good sense!

I really liked the battle between the colossal dragon demon and Dolga. Dolga seem to be a very powerful fox demon. He defeated that dragon with it's colossal size.

Dolga sword, Kogarasumaru was trying to save his master by placing him into a green sphere barrier. This reminds me of what Tensaiga did with Sesshomaru after Inuyasha had defeated him and almost killed him with his wind scar, when Sesshomaru tried to break his sword with that dragon's arm. But it was his Tensaiga acting on it's own to save Sesshomaru's life.

It was after that fight that Sesshomaru landed under that tree where he first met Rin. I take it that Rin will find Dolga and save his life and then will become Sesshomaru's rival for Rin love and heart.

I can't wait to see what will happen next! :)

A cat demon and a dog demon huh! Interesting to say the least. :D
A cat is naturally scared of a dog, so the same would be true for cat and dog demons.

Sesshomaru brings terror and fear with him wherever he goes, even when he is not trying to. Yes, he was very dedicated to buying Rin kimonos. Of course he would put thought and consideration into it because Rin was very special to him.

He knew about the rumors and at this point he didn't say anything to anyone about them. He seemed to have fallen in love with the beautiful Rin and isn't able to admit it to himself.

He surely would have a light expression on his face when he was on his way to the village. It was because of Rin. He was going to see his Rin.

This chapter was okay. It really had too many details about Sesshomaru picking out a kimono for Rin. Really this is focused too much on the kimono. There could have been less focus on the kimono and more on Sesshomaru reaching the village, maybe finding out what was happening with Rin, Inuyasha and Miroku.

There could have been something other than that much focus on the kimono. Something more interesting that could have been happening.

Sorry, not trying to be harsh. You asked?
I still liked it.

Rin is as sweet as ever and she still really loves nature!
She really get caught up in it's beauty! At times allowing it to cause her to forget what she was doing. She just can't help it because that is who she is.

She is being watched by a Salamander demord lord because of her beauty. She will definitely have to be very careful from now on.

I see that Kaede wanted to give her a little freedom to roam around but I don't think that was a good idea. She don't know that she is being watched and she just may go to far and someone or something can try to kidnap her.

Kaede is wondering if Sesshomaru will allow Rin to marry if she wish to or will he prevent her from marrying. Sesshomaru will never allow Rin to marry anyone. She belong to him. Kaede just don't know but Sesshomaru is in love with Rin himself.

So the Salamander demon lord sent his fools to try and kidnap Rin. I am so glad that Inuyasha and Miroku ran into them before they could get to Rin.
It seems strange that those Salamander was able to dough Inuyasha's wind scar and wasn't afraid of his backlash wave. I wonder why?

They were stupid enough to tell Inuyasha and Miroku they came for a lady in that village. Inuyasha you don't have to worry about it being Kagome, because it is Rin they want.

This must have been happen a lot because Inuyasha and Miroku both said not again!

Rin, why did you have to show up where Inuyasha and Miroku was fighting those Salamander who want to kidnap you and take you to the lord to be his mate?

Inuyasha and Miroku both asked Rin what she was doing so far out? Now they really is going to have to kill those fools to protect Rin from them.

Really Nice Chapter! :D

nice fic... looking forward to the 'competition' between sesshomaru & Dolga. ..