Who is the mother of Tobirama's daughter?

it went ok then to shit. They didnt even have any thing going for them... It was a one night stand, no romance. Just Mito craving sex and did with madara and got pregnant boom.

It just connects, you know. The characters are in the right place. So beautifully written. This story almost seemed like canon. I just hoped there was more of Madara. Anyways, thanks for the good read. :)))

I liked the social boundaries, but I think it was taken just a little bit too far during the bar scene. I can't say i'm too impressed with your interpretation of Madara, because I can't see him as someone like that, I think it just exacerbates on the evil character many make him out to be.
Anyway,I Ioved the plot a lot, and I liked your version of Mito and what she actually felt. Many stories render her to being a figure heard and a trophy wife, but this story made her feel...real, like an actual human being. The AN was sad, but i'm glad it held some background info. I think it's clever what you did with Karin's linage. I think that you should slow down when you write though and pay attention to little details but either way, this was a really good piece and well thought out. The orphanage part, however, was sad. I could only imagine how it was for her, and i'm glad she found Daisuke again. You should write a sequel.

dat end... omg the author notes almost made me cry... so sad! but i like it x)

What a sad story. It would be nice to see a sequel especially about karin finding about her great grandparents or Madara finding about his daughter.

hmm. very interesting one-shot.