Reviews for Primal |
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shanrw123 chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 Plz plz plz update soon I LOVE IT |
laternenfisch chapter 1 . 6/16/2016 this is interesting! can't wait to see where this goes |
snowbarry11 chapter 1 . 4/28/2016 Hahaha funny |
Black Bloody Rose Dragon chapter 1 . 12/14/2015 Nooo don't end there it was getting good! |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2014 I like your story. |
AngelMaree chapter 1 . 5/8/2014 PLEASE UPDATE :-) :-) |
bluephoenix65069 chapter 1 . 1/20/2014 Love it and can't wait for more. Keep up the great work. |
WhyWouldITellYou chapter 1 . 1/9/2014 update? |
Parldro chapter 1 . 11/6/2013 Aaaahhhh yes need updates...must see what happens next...love your OC she is intoxicating already. LOVE it :) |
SilverHeartedVampire chapter 1 . 11/3/2013 Please more. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE |
Secret Fantasy Reader chapter 1 . 10/31/2013 more please soon |
The Doctor Rose chapter 1 . 10/22/2013 update |
shika93 chapter 1 . 10/14/2013 Ha, good beginning. |
mel chapter 1 . 10/1/2013 please update soon |
Rosmund Chadwick chapter 1 . 10/2/2013 Not bad. This is interesting and I can't wait to see where it goes. My only suggestion is that you put in more paragraphs, this makes the fic easier to read, in my opinion. When a paragraph is so long it's almost like the words blur together. . . . .and you can't exactly use a bookmark on a computer fic. |