Reviews for Primal
shanrw123 chapter 1 . 6/22/2016
Plz plz plz update soon
I LOVE IT
laternenfisch chapter 1 . 6/16/2016
this is interesting! can't wait to see where this goes
snowbarry11 chapter 1 . 4/28/2016
Hahaha funny
Black Bloody Rose Dragon chapter 1 . 12/14/2015
Nooo don't end there it was getting good!
Guest chapter 1 . 6/4/2014
I like your story.
AngelMaree chapter 1 . 5/8/2014
PLEASE UPDATE :-) :-)
bluephoenix65069 chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
Love it and can't wait for more. Keep up the great work.
WhyWouldITellYou chapter 1 . 1/9/2014
update?
Parldro chapter 1 . 11/6/2013
Aaaahhhh yes need updates...must see what happens next...love your OC she is intoxicating already. LOVE it :)
SilverHeartedVampire chapter 1 . 11/3/2013
Please more. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
Secret Fantasy Reader chapter 1 . 10/31/2013
more please soon
The Doctor Rose chapter 1 . 10/22/2013
update
shika93 chapter 1 . 10/14/2013
Ha, good beginning.
mel chapter 1 . 10/1/2013
please update soon
Rosmund Chadwick chapter 1 . 10/2/2013
Not bad. This is interesting and I can't wait to see where it goes. My only suggestion is that you put in more paragraphs, this makes the fic easier to read, in my opinion. When a paragraph is so long it's almost like the words blur together. . . . .and you can't exactly use a bookmark on a computer fic.
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