Wow love it please continue

me gusto, estuvo interesante, gracias por escribirla

This is...fucking great omg.

I really liked this! I wish it was multi chartered. it would be I interesting to see Hinata be able to master her new doujutsu(that's how you spell it?) and see how strong she is and how she defeats enemy's. it will also be interesting to see if organizations like the akatsuki will go after her to make her join or too see people like orochimaru or other strong villages go after Hinata.

This is awesome! If I can get down a second chapter I will totally adopt it! But I dunno because while I have ideas.. No matter how detailed it is.. Weaving the ideas into a story is a different matter.

Whoa~... Your writing just constantly blows me away! I love this story so much! This concept, this everything! It's so great! I just wish this could continue. Alas, all good things must come to an end. And as a writer I understand how ideas just sometimes come in parts, separate from the passion or inspiration that fuels it's creation.

All seeing Hinata was adorable. The way she made Sasuke promise! And started blushing unhealthily (more so than usual) around Naruto. A nicely written piece about the possibilities of the byakugan. Have been wondering about it myself. Too bad Kishi never developed it. A comment about the writing: though for the most part it flowed nicely, some sentences were just too long. But otherwise, bravo!

Just flipping amazing! I always wondered what would be the second stage of Byakugan. It makes sense!

i wonder if she saw herself marrying naruto as one of his future(s)..?

This was great, sadly it's very short

That was different. I liked the fact that you didn't change her character much but yet still seemed to alter the original story line. Good job.
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I love this . I completely love this. Thank for writing this .

Hahaha oh man that ending I love it so!
I would love to read more of this! She could mess with so many people's heads!

If this is ever made into a full story (by you or anyone else), please notify me. This was quite the interesting story.

This is very interesting. I might look into writing an expansion off this, if that's okay with you. I'll pm you soon if I come up with a decent plotline for this.