Pues sí son perfectos

Loved this although I have to admit a little more explicitness would have been greatly appreciated! It was probably rated in a way that would have forewarned me as to the fact but I'm not aware of the rating system in this fan site.

Nevertheless yr story totally held my attention and I liked the dialog a great deal. Thank goodness John came to his senses and realized he was more attracted to S.H. Poor Molly - but she is rather dull and ordinary, I think. Like I am most everybody else is:)

Thank you again for everything.

Oh my lord i so did not see that coming. I wanna scream!

that was unexpected. but I cant wait to read more.

You should finish this story before you get too far along on the other one. *LOL* Sorry, but . . . To go from Chapter 10, a lovely Johnlock entree, to the full course, I believe is a waste of writer's space. Here you could (for one thing) spend fun times developing how the boys make it to marriage. There are all sorts of confusion and conflicts that could arise, even if they aren't between the boys, with friends and family. More could be done with figuring out how a straight guy like John got to be besotted by Sherlock. Is it just his "lick me" looks, or does character also have something to do with it? And there are many other angles you could pursue!

Great read. I criticize for your benefit and mine.

Lumin57

Well, this is certainly goofy and fluffy, but judging by my own Johnlock experiment I am in absolutely no position to judge you! And nevermind, anyway, as it is enjoyable to read. Brought a smile to my face, too!
TapTap

it was okay but the ending was really rushed

I greatly enjoy this story. You were constantly tossing my feelings back and forth, ripping my heart out then shoving it back at me. For the most part, it was well written. The only thing I have a comment on is the last chapter. I love how it ended but I believe it could have been better written, as in better detailed and more descriptive, since the ending was quite brief. Other than that it was an excellent story.

aww!

Love love love it! They are so cute!

OMG...one I started I couldn't stop...perfect

I love this! I have read it like three times and it gets better every time

Good story, good chapter!

I don't really understand... what happend to John?

I loved this story as a whole, only I wished the last 2 were not so short with vital information. I wish it had gone into more detail with how John regained his memory.