Reviews for Zero Deference |
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Kian Xki chapter 1 . 5/8/2019 yes! the runaway familiar! WOO! |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/21/2019 I have a segestun you take guts and all the named members of his traveling party and you also add rekert and his traveling party are summoned by Louise |
GrumpyGrue chapter 2 . 9/18/2018 You're the best! Around! Nothing's ever gonna keep you down! |
GrumpyGrue chapter 1 . 9/18/2018 Be free Guts! |
Ryoji Mochizuki chapter 2 . 7/10/2018 ...Interesting, the first FOZ fin I've ever seen where the familiar immediately runs. Also, henriettaBehelith? Egh. |
Bad Anon chapter 2 . 11/29/2017 Well, that was nice. Guts slaughtering a horse is nice touch. Its vary Guts of him, and the whole operation of stealing a little girl's horse and killing the old man's sets a good tone for his escape. Henrietta was Eh. Griffith only earned his badguy credit after raping Casca to insanity and killing 99(?) of his own guys. That's setting the bar a little high for Henrietta, though with it being pre-eclipse it would be purely for reader enjoyment; seeing if she can one up or match Griffith for biggest DickMoves. 40 reviews/1 chapter words is a ridiculous rate of reviewing, especially 1.5k chapters. Personally I never understood those college heavy types. People can go back to school later, after working. Not ideal, but nothings perfect. Anyway, nice chapter; hope you flush out how Guts messing up FoZ will snowball. Instigate five way war? Communist esque plebeian uprising under Guts? More dead horses? You could have some real fun with were this goes. |
Bad Anon chapter 1 . 11/29/2017 Well, this is... old. Still good, well written and delivers solid premise; but old. Familiar of Zero is a dead fad now, and while I loved it while it lasted, nothing of significant note came of it. Berserk has always been the underdog of the anime world in general; too mature and violent for kids, its pathetic target market has kept it from a breakout anime release for years on end. Berserk doesn't crossover well. Guts isn't Harry Potter, or Naruto, or Goku. He's a normal human, like Aragorn or Sgt. Angel; he changes the story with his actions, not his mere presence or magic bullcr_p. And you take that and run with it. Most stick religiously to the canonical storyline with a different character in Saito's place, but you have Guts rocking the boat immidaity. It's sad, but with the other factors of your writing that sets this 3k word diddy over 99% of FoZ crossovers. Competition was stiff, I know. Will be interesting to see just how you expand this, as it looks like your most popular fic in reviews/word count. Sadly, with Foz fading from public interest and Berserk needing some serious love, you'll probably be getting the same 1k reader's each update. Excellent story so far. |
thepkrmgc chapter 2 . 7/26/2017 Freedom! it really is a shame that this wasnt continued |
thepkrmgc chapter 1 . 7/26/2017 guts is very much in character here, and this fic is well named |
professionalemail101 chapter 2 . 7/19/2017 ITS BEEN LIKE THREE YEARS AND THIS IS SO GOOD SO PLEASE UPDATE |
Dark 7 Thunder chapter 2 . 6/19/2017 I hope you do more of this story. |
Of The Astral Plains chapter 2 . 5/29/2017 Well written. Hope there is more to come. |
Doomeater chapter 2 . 3/25/2017 So... Herenitta has a Behelit eh? This'll be most interesting |
Doomeater chapter 1 . 3/25/2017 Good job man! Keep it up! |
Lovnag chapter 2 . 10/2/2016 Well, this does seem quite interesting. |