I really enjoyed this! Thank you so much for sharing this with us! Keep up the good work :)

There were a lot of grammatical errors, like putting a comma in the middle of a sentence where it doesn't belong, but I loved it. You had a very thought-out idea of what you wanted to write.

I'm crying right know. See it as a compliment. :'(

Cute. :)

I felt their pain, i felt max's and liesel's. I've been searching for what seems like forever for a good liesel/max fic and this is the one. It was very emotional, but also very well written :)
I also enjoyed the way you had death give his opinions on things like the way he did in the book. It made your story seem more real.

this is a very beautiful story. the emotions travel well through words. :)

This was a beautiful, angst filled one shot. I really enjoyed it.
In regards to her age, it was also a different time, so I wouldn't worry about it too much.

Very good!

This is fantastic. You're a great writer. :)

Omg. Fabulous. And only a one shot ! I need more more!