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   CampPillow chapter 16 . 8/15 I vote Law, Ace and Luffy were already brothers in this story or cannon. Be weird If they ended up together. Even if law is weird Not marco, he's like 32 when Luffy is 6 43 when luffy is 17 26 years is a huge number gap. Right now she is underaged for any of this stuff 45 when Luffy is 19, She is basically dating an old man Who says “Age is just a number“? When theres a frickin 26 age/number gape! At least law is the appropriate age for luffy 17 and 25 9 year gap is reasonable. At this point I'm Just trying to convince others who have voted Marco. Read the first part again if you must. |
| SilverMoonstone-1 chapter 14 . 7/14 Law obviously. Marco is way too old. and Ace has a sister complex so he probably wouldn't allow her to do what she wanted. and anyway. marco and ace(well he will be. maybe) are whitebeard pirates so they would be too far away from her. Law is the smart choice. sorry for the rant |
| SilverMoonstone-1 chapter 6 . 7/14 Not to be rude or anything. Just stating a fact. Okay. So if you hadn't read up to MarineFord don't worry, I'm not spoiling anything. Basically Haruta was at MarineFord when it happened and after that Eiichi Oda had confirmed that -other than Boa Hancock- there were no girls there at the time. So it was confirmed that Haruta is a boy. Sorry if that sounded rude. And I understand that you didn't know. A lot of people mistake Haruta for a girl. |
| acetwolf94 chapter 16 . 6/10 I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE! |
| NicoGaiangelo chapter 16 . 3/10/2019 I really like how you’ve branches out from the original storyline and let Luffy have new adventures and learn new things! Also an awesome surprise seeing Law there, he’s definitely one of my favorite characters. :) I’m excited to see how her knowledge of Haki, sword fighting, and her new DF will alter the course of history. Very cool story, thanks for writing ! |
| hazelho chapter 14 . 2/21/2019 of course Marco, I love them and so cute when thay are together! |
| Servillius chapter 16 . 12/5/2018 This story is really awesome! |
| silverwolf310 chapter 16 . 12/2/2018 Ace/Luffy/Law |
| SeleneAlice chapter 16 . 10/29/2018 Ace/Luffy/law |
| Lucy846 chapter 16 . 9/10/2018 Please update its amazing story and I vote for marco. |
| iamafoxnamedVaux chapter 16 . 8/6/2018 For what it’s worth, my vote is for Marco... please keep writing... |
| Guest chapter 16 . 7/21/2018 that's one of the best fanfictikns i've ever read ! it will be amazing if there's a sequel for it ! i'm excited to knkw what will hapen next ! |
| Shiranui Rixma chapter 16 . 5/26/2018 Marco with Luffy is so cute. I like how story is moving. |
| SakuraKoi chapter 16 . 5/24/2018 wow |
| Faezier chapter 16 . 4/10/2018 I know you haven’t updated in 2ish years, but I really hope you do soon! |
