I’m soooooo sad this story had to end cuz it was really good. Through your clear talent of writing I felt as though I was right beside jasper through all of this. After all the true strength of a writer is the ability to make the readers feel as if their right their with the characters seeing and feeling what the characters are going through what they are going through. So on that note you truly ARE a worthy writer. I suggest you try to get some of your works published and I think that Stephanie Myers herself would approve of your fanfictions she’d be crazy not too. Thanx for telling such a great story and I hope to read more fanfictions from you in the future after all I’m totally hooked on your fanfics. You did an awesome job so I truly and deeply thank you for this true work of art! Keep writing!

I love this story so far!
I was just listening to Chp Suey by System Of A Down and thought that it really fit the story.

This is a great, moving story about dealing with such difficult feelings. I enjoyed it. If you want concrit, I think you should have done this before they met Bella. That would better explain how he felt confident enough to tell his story to Bella in the books, and we wouldn’t have lost Bella and Renesme in the ether. After Edward tells her to stay at home with the kid, we never saw or heard from them again, save for that one thought that poked fun at your zapping of them. Even the girl’s hunt didn’t have her! LOL

Still well worth the read. Thanks for sharing!

Love the story, thank you. Poor Jasper!

Amaing, I love your style.I was so into the feelings and really have a talent,omg jasper overcome his past waouh

Yay! Oh that was wonderful! For whatever reason, I saw a question mark next to 29 for some time so I thought the story had never been finished! It makes me so happy to see it has been!

This story has been amazing, your characters are extremely in character, your feelings and ways to handle certain situations is extremely realistic, everything played out perfectly.

Thank you so much for writing this, I just breezed through to in only two days so I quite enjoyed it :) Thank you for writing this absolutely wonderful story, keep writing!

Rose

Ahh! That was amazing!

I still felt terrible for Jasper, when she turned on him and hissed out "did you just hiss at me?" Jasper was just trying to protect the ones he loved, and he's not a coward! It's terrifying to stand up to someone who mentally, physically, and sexually abuses you for years and years!

I am so glad Carlisle stood up to her, and stood up for Jasper. Thank god for him. It's so sad that such hard work can be so brutally attacked in just a few minutes. God, she really is insane.

Haha, I loved Alice going dark and telling Maria off! She's a fucking psychopath, like Rosalie said. I'm really glad Emmet and Esme were there too, and tha god they avoided having to deal with another newborn army!

Oh dear, I do hope Jasper will be okay. I want he and Alice to be okay and I don't want him to step back in progress, I mean, it would make sense if he did but I really hope he will be okay.

So sad to be going off to read the last chapter, hopefully one day you come back!

NOOOO! I knew Maria would come back!

I really liked the binding moments with Jasper and Carlisle, I thought it was super sweet when they had their heads resting. It was also incredibly intelligent of Carlisle to guard Jasper when he was hunting, to give him that familiar feeling. I also enjoyed that he kept telling Jasper not to feel so guilty, and being honest with Jasper- ah what's going to happen with Maris in the mix?!

Why did Peter and Charlotte have to leave?!

Wow, that was really brave of Peter to tell Carlisle that. I'm curious to see if 'To Love The Unloved' is almost like a continuation with this, or just focuses more on Jasper's sexual abuse.

When Jasper said Alice deserved someone clean, that was heartbreaking. I hate the way Jasper sees himself, I understand it's common for those who have undergone such experiences, but it was really sad. But I am really glad that Jasper is starting to be more open, even speaking when unprompted, even if it was only once.

Sad to see there are only s few chapters left :( Thank you for updating!

Awww! I loved the ending! I'm sad I'm almost to the end of the updates, but this was so sweet! I really love Carlisle, you've done a great job keeping him in character, which you always do :)

I also think you do a great job explaining things from Jasper's point of view, and how he sees Maria and bravery and Elias and weakness in his own mind. S story continues to be wonderful, I don't want it to end! Thank you for updating!

Oh, poor Jasper. I knew he would feel bad :( I'm really glad he's becoming more open to working in things though, I really hope he will get better. I epreally enjoy moments in the books where Jasper would smile or make a joke, and I really hope I will be able to see those here.

I'm also glad Peter is staying, and I'm so glad Jasper and Alice seem to be doing better, of course, stuff will happen and things will go wrong, but Jasper's on his way. Thank you for updating!

I'm really glad Peter was there! Poor Carlisle! I felt really bad for him, he and Edward were just trying to helo but of course Jasper didn't know that.

I bet Jasper is going to feel absolutely awful when he finds out all that happened, and everyone is certainly going to be a lot more curious/concerned about him now.

I would be really interested in seeing more flashbacks. Thanks for updating, I'm really hoping this continues!

Aah! Maria was probably furious with Jasper for letting Peter and Charlotte go! The torture he endured must have been terrible!

It totally makes sense that vampires can't cry, but sometimes I wonder how they deal with their emotions. Also, Alice made a good point about how Jasper is not the one who is different, and Edward is right, they are all really lucky to have Carlisle! I really like Charlotte and Peter, I really hope they are able to help.

Thank you for updating, I hope you come back soon! Even thoug I'm in chapter 22 and realize it could be quite some time before you do.

Aah! Elias was walking in?! Oh no. Oh no. No tie will be awful. Poor, poor, poor Jasper. God, he doesn't deserve this.

Your flashbacks were incredibly written, it makes me so sad though that in his last Jasper would just roll over and give up because he knew what would happen if he didn't. I hope Peter and Charlotte can be of some help.

Thank you for updating, I really hope you come back!

Geez, this story is so dark. He's basically there to lie around waiting to be tortured, to entertain them all. Poor Jasper. I feel so bad for him. Maybe I have a dark mind. But I could believe this had happened to him.

I'm really glad Rosalie is there to help Carlisle, I really want Jasper to smile and be happy and honest and believe in himself. Thank you for updating, I hope you come back!