I loved it!I just love this anime and all the possible couples!

This is by far my favorite story about Murasakibara and Midorima. They are so in-character here; just perfect. The reactions between everyone else are also priceless. What an enjoyable read. Please continue writing for the two of them!

I loved this story and Shintarou's mother was SO funny! Great job!

Oh god that was good i Soo wanted more

Oh god! i want a mom like that!

I especially think that Mura is a cute boy :") I mean with eating so many snacks and how he speaks nonchalantly? Oh my, I love this side of him. I don't love his other side as much as I love that side X3

And Mido is ... he is the first tsundere I admire XD He is cute the way he is. Kkkkk. Meh, I'm sorry for the rambling :'p

Thank tou for writing this! I enjoyed it much. Mido's mother is so fun and understanding XD What a rare kind of mom to want her child doing some bad things XDD

too kawaii to put in words

LOLing so much reading this. Really funny!

My god, I really really loved this xD It was quite short in comparison to what I usually read but that definitely doesn't mean it wasn't good! Or a 'failed attempt' as you called it. I think it's nice how you managed to keep both Atsushi and Midorima pretty much IC even during the kissing scenes! Especially the way you let us read what they were thinking and how they thought about each other was great :3
You also showed Murasakibara's way of not really caring for anyone besides the ones that gained his stamp of approval, making me laugh at times. The scene with the child annoyed even me even thou I wasn't exactly present. I dislike small children so reading about one being annoying made me feel quite a bit of symphathy for both Midorima and Murasakibara x'P
Oh, and I totally love the ending x3 All of them in denial, the mother weirdly proud and the two the story is about quite happy behind closed doors. Let's hope the mom doesn't walk in on anything, I doubt Midorima would ever live that down!
Greetings and thank you!
Aerun

Tis hard to find MuraMido fics on here/people who like them together. I'm glad ya like MuraMido too; Araaaa that was a rlly good fic! We should write a MuraMido together or somethin /bricked

That was beautiful. Truly, truly beautiful.
I love how you write Atsushi...his strange logic, childish forgetfulness, and extreme jealousy were just perfect. And trying to get Midorin's attention just like that, ahh so wonderful. And of course Midorin is the king of the tsundere and totally unwilling to confront his own feelings...
And the group scenes were great and totally didn't take away from the romantic aspects! I mean, I love all the Yosen guys. They're hilarious. And Kagami's eyebrows...and Kuroko and Takao and Takao's cousin. And I'm still laughing about the Kagami-is-a-mutant conversation.
And Midorin's mother! I died laughing.
And just...it was great. Atsushi stopping in the middle of a heavy makeout session to cuddle and talk about his feelings? Great.

Your English is definitely better in this one. There were a few word choice and grammar things, but there were a lot fewer than your last story.