Reviews for What If
Yellowrose chapter 14 . 2/11/2016
This is a really good story..i hope you can continue to write this. Some of the characters are well written and true to their personalities. Could you make it R&T fanfic ? Coz im a Rui-fangirl at heart,through and through...and i hardly see those kind of stories.. and why does tsukushi have to be hurt so much? I know rui has personality problems like tsukasa and i wish rui will change from the cold,uncaring rui he was to the warm and caring hanazawa rui.. and before tsukushi's feelings towards tsukasa slowly get her to see him in a different light. And Eventhough he's a childish,self-centered, arrogant,violent baka, he's actually kinda innocent & simple-minded that he seem's silly at times,but his love for makino is unquestionable. Thats it.. but hey, if she ends up with tsukasa i won't complain. I trust your judgement.
Rachela2 chapter 20 . 4/15/2009
hi there, i started reading ur story and finished it in one seating.. i havta admit at 1st i was kinda confused wif the flashbacks but now im not.. hmm its d first time i have seen a story which puts shizuka as a villainous person who is seldish but i like how the plot is going.. its really good so pls continue with the story.. thanks.
Lina Mistress of Elements chapter 20 . 2/4/2009
Evil Shizuka

I want Tsukushi to still end up with Rui though
princessswan chapter 20 . 11/21/2008
Aww Makino don't give up! Anyway, love this story.. please update again soon! :)
Rah chapter 20 . 8/22/2008
YAY! An UPDATE!
Moonlightofsnow508 chapter 20 . 8/3/2008
Plz update, this story is really good, and I am really really serious! And you update for a good story so plz update more!
hkLampshade chapter 20 . 8/3/2008
I really don't know what else to say except the chapter was so short. x.x However the update made me immensely happy. So I guess they cancel each other out? Haha, I look forward to your next update. _
Himynameislucy chapter 19 . 7/28/2008
Update plz, I really think this is a good story!
hkLampshade chapter 19 . 7/9/2008
Your fanfiction is possibly the most confusing story I've yet to read yet despite all of that..I'd like to read more.
addieXmitsume chapter 1 . 4/29/2008
one question...are they a freshmen here...makino and company?...LOVE IT _ how about shizuka ?...
Adam Park chapter 19 . 2/19/2008
Belle fic, Tsukushi va-t-elle aider Rui ou non ?
Ice chapter 19 . 12/16/2007
i have really been looking for next chapter for so long, when will it be published?
Sadist chapter 5 . 12/3/2007
I have read the first 5 chapters and this story had me rather confused. It keeps jumping to things without me knowing and it seems too unorganized to me.

I will try to read more to see improvement, and I sure hope there will be.
trangatang chapter 1 . 7/23/2007
i look foward to reading the rest of the story ]

keep it up!
Guest chapter 19 . 7/19/2007
it took you FIVE years and you still haven't finished your story?
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