interesting.

Love it!

As soon as you said "earpieces connected to the brain" my imagination gave their voices that echo-y effect they use in Ghost In The Shell.
Good story -

Interesting AU: very original! :)

Damn.

I was actually pretty disappointed in RWBY, because THIS is basically what we were promised. And then it gave us something else entirely, something far more tacky comedy instead.

And that was ok, I got over it, because RWBY is still really funny, and really enjoyable. I do not regret it.

Seeing this though, reminds me of what I wanted, and I'm now sad this is only a short story.

Thank you for your artistic contribution and perspective.

Je l'adore, thank you!

I really liked this story! well done! - is another chappie on the way?

This is one of the better RWBY fanfics I've read. I really enjoyed it, great work! _

I... I want to know more about this different universe! You should flesh it out, it has such great potential!

I really like how "of course" seems to be the go-to phrase for Weiss' characterization in this one.

I have fallen in love with this Agents of Beacon AU :-) This plan of Ruby's just seems so, her. She wanted to just talk him down, but then... sigh. And then Weiss, having to clean up after her partner the dolt. ;-) Very good story. Thanks!

Very interesting and enjoyable to read :)

Its pretty good , good job

Quite enjoyable.

Oh, so you did. sorry didnt see that.