I think Petra's death was the thousands of deaths in this manga that hurt me the most. Anyway. I loved your fic!

Sad but sweet at the same time. Thanks for sharing!

i cried

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This is so touching :_(

too bad. at the the forest. she was PETRA-FIED

WHY SO MUCH SADNESS? It shouldn't be legal, dammit! Anyways, it was beautifully written and so sweetly tragic. Why toy with my feelings like this? ;-;

Omg. Can this be an ova atleast? Damn it. Sooo good haha

I love how you used the term 'cup of tea' I really like your story I was on the verge of tears. Mentally anyway. This was heartbreaking. I loved it!

I'm rather impressed. You managed to tie this bonus chapter really well with the previous one (even if it was unintentional it still is very cohesive). Thinking about it, Levi was trying to tell Petra that he loved her too. She silenced him with her own line, she knew that it was unlike him to be intimate and decided to preserve his ego. And yet, this causes so much conflict feelings in Levi, he wanted but he couldn't. Her love for him was very vivid and very real indeed. Not many people can write something good enough to make me give a review. I'd say your writing style was compelling enough.

However, I think you have said yourself, you experienced a writer's block. Which is why I noticed that some of the actions you described could be further taken to prolong and deepen the richness these two have. The chemistry was flowing rivers but you cut some of them short. Which frankly speaking, wasn't enough to satisfy my libido (yes, I said it).

Overall, I appreciate the work you did even if this piece is 2013 and it's 2015 now. Nonetheless, I encourage you to keep writing.

Best regards,
duhbla

You have broken my heart

I wish this is what happend in the manga and anime

Hi! :) I am an avid Rivetra shipper and I also review lemon stories esp. if the story is based on my ship. And I may say that you captured my sentiments in your story. It was well balanced. It's tragic (but not too painful compared to the other fanfics I've read - which is good because I dont want to have my heart broken again due to fanfics xD). Also I like it because it triggered my empathy towards Levi. :))

Regarding the Lemon part, your lemon story has a plot and I like it. It's lemon but at the same time it triggered empathetic emotions which I was touched. It's not the typical lemon story that focuses more on the "making of love", instead it focused on the emotions of the two characters. :)

Good Job! :)

-RivetraFangirl

Ouch my feels. Love this

Awwwwwwwwww.