Reviews for Discombobulate |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Have just read this one through in one sitting. Great, well drawn out suspense - I was getting very concerned about Doyle. Bodie's reaction to the situation was very much in character. Enjoying your stories. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Absolutely brilliant. A well thought out, and excellently written. |
![]() ![]() ![]() An excellent story from start to finish and one that I shall find myself reading again and again. |
![]() ![]() ![]() An excellent piece of work. I have just read this from start to finish. I think I went through every one of those emotions with Bodie, from guilt, anguish, pain and relief. A real roller coaster of a story. Thank you very much. |
![]() ![]() ![]() The sign of a good writer and excellent writing is to keep the reader interested and eager to know what happens next. I was hooked from chapter 1. Chapter 5 found me desolate, and desperate to find out whether Bodie finds his partner in time and whether Doyle survives (mentally and/or physically). The resolution in your final chapter was wonderful. Publishing it chapter by chapter was the way to go with a long story like this. A huge round of applause for a gripping story. Thank you. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Brilliant. ! I might have known it wouldn't be a simple straightforward finish. Instead it was suspense and tension right to the end. I have really enjoyed this all the way through, and I know I am going to re-read it and enjoy it again. Congratulations on a terrific piece of work, Regards , Halcris. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So glad you finished this, all I can say is fantastic. The whole story held you all the way through, even the last chapter had a twist I wasn't expecting. Lovely dedication at the end, they will always live in our memories. |
![]() ![]() Please tell me there is more to come-just don't end it here |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is by far the best story I have read in a long time. It's so well written and compelling and I don't think I breathed much while reading this latest chapter! You should be very proud. Well done. |
![]() ![]() Come on, next part asap! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is absolutely great ! I am so impressed. I've followed every section, waiting impatiently for the next bit. Thank you so much. Regards ,Halcris. |
![]() ![]() So, so good, please don't leave it there. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, poor Doyle! |
![]() ![]() That is very good, talk about keeping us hanging on. Hope the next chapter follows soon. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh Wow! This is brilliant and so gripping. Can't wait for some more! |