Fourthwheelshipping?

"Brotherly instincts" #lol

That's a lot of hope to put on a short, 10min tops, memory Serena. Especially if that person is naturally helpfully...

Poor Clemont and James. Is Allie Calem's sister? I don't think I saw them interacting

Hi, how old are they all supposed to be?

Aw, well I can understand the feeling of losing steam with a story, it's something I've been fighting for a while now. At least it was nice to get one last run with this one. I'll be eagerly anticipating the replacement in the meantime. Thanks for the great story!

it seems like its been a very long time since i posted a chapter review. i hope we all get to see serena and ash get married together in the future as husband and wife in the pokemon series and beyond. we all will remain amourshippers and we all will continue to support amourshipping for all time. as a fellow amourshipper i have this to say to you and to all my fellow amourshippers around the globe who support amourshipping, amourshipper and proud, remember that dudes and dudettes and keep up the good serenaandashshipping work dude.

Maria? You mean Serena.

isn't that Mabel? I think so it is not Mable

Don't lie Ash I vaguely remember you trying to force pikachu too battle in season one!

I am getting really anxious and quizzical as to when the next chapter will come out.

Interesting chapter.
I'm confused, why Serena so angry if Ash and Delia where the ones abandoned, she have no right to demand for explanations and answers only Delia and Ash should be the ones doing it, I get that she was mad at seeing Ash sad but only the son and wife should be the ones asking for a explanation about that painful event in their lifes.

Hmm, so there are two Ash's one is the father and the other is the kid, so is Ash dad and Ash Jr, Red Ketchum would had fit him better to avoid confusion between father and son when the names are used.

Don't see why Ash needed to mega evolve his Charizard in order to deal with mirror Lucario, when we know how powerful Ash Charizard really is and had doble type advantage over Lucario.

So Ash dad have a Mewtwo with him, how in the world he is ashamed when he got a powerful legendary pokemon

Now Clemont had his own Key stone that was given to him by his father, I'm starting to belive Key Stones and Mega Stones grow on trees everybody had one or two, then again in the anime Ash don't get any besides his Greninja weird transformation/form.

Fun chapter.
With the pokemons fighting between thenselves when they should be cooperating with each other.

There was baking tornament and Serena won figures and as prize got a egg.
Get the feeling that the egg will be a Treeko going by the AN of loving Mega Sceptile, also waiting for Ash to bring his own Sceptile back he already had the sceptilite with him, only needs his second most powerful pokemon to use.

This was a good yet slighly dissapointing chapter.
My reasons foe saying are because Charizard had trained so much and by now he can match Elite Four, Champions and Legendary pokemons, so he should be able to easily hold his own against Gurkin Mega Lucario even withouth mega evolving.
I understand that it was his first time using Mega Evolution, but even so Charizard was pathetic he loss after one single attack hit him, no matter how effective he had survived super effective attacks before like nothing and now he ia take down even with the powerboost he got from the Mega Evolution, I also understand the Gurkin Lucario is much mor experienced than Korrina but still, Charizard had fough Articuno and Entei two very powerful legendary pokemons and managed to defeat one and hold his own against the other who more overpowered than usual because of the Unown all of that when he wasn't as strong as he is now.
Charizard is Ash strongest pokemon, followed by Sceptile, then Pikachu, then Infernape and so on, so I found his defeat very unecesary at least they could tie. But will see how things go.

It was obvious that Serena would get Lucario since she already had the mega stone for one, even though a Lucario only trust those who raise then as Riolu due to their Aura, she now got a strong fully evolved pokemon capable of mega evolution withouth any hard work in training and evolving the pokemon in this case Lucario, the same was with Iris she didn't deserved Dragonite the guy had trained and make himself powerful, she didn't worked hard to help him evolve or get the power he had. But that is just my opinion I don't not wish to be sound harsh and if I did sorry for that it wasn't my intention just wanted to express my opinion.

This was a interesting chapter.
So it was Xerneas who gave Charizard the mega stone as reward, it make sense since where he would find the Charizardite X just like that and Sycamore was the one who gave Ash the Key stone he had needed to activate the Mega Stone on the pokemon, since he was going to use it with Garchomp but though Ash was better suited for it use, but was very surprising that Charizard found a legendary and peotected it as well it.

Pretty cool that Ash and the others also got the Mega Stones necesary for Mega Evolution, Ash got the one for Sceptile can't wait for Ash to bring his strongest Grass type pokemon back, Clemont got Charizardite Y though I think that he as a Electric type trainer should get the one for Manetric instead of Charmander but still cool, also Serena have one for Blastoise and what appear to be a Lucarionite since said pokemon was looking at her but that confused me since she don't use aura like Ash.
Now Clemont and Serena need their own Key Stone and evolve their pokemons and try the Mega Evolution to see how it goes for then.

Along with them getting the appropiate jewerly to hold the Stones, Ash apparently got a Mega Ring like Alain now need a holder for Charizard and Sceptile to hold their respective Mega Stones.

Can't belive that Ash father is in Kalos no wonder Oak was so wary of letting Ash go there.

Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays.