Omg! I freaking loved it! So hot!

Cute story

Rereading this story because I love it

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Holy Shit that was your first lemon. That was soooooooooooo good. Like amazingly greatly magnificent. Keep up the good work.

No way in hell is that your first lemon. That was amazing

I loved it!

Perfection especially for your first lemon GOOD JOB

first lemon? I've read a few better, but I don't believe you. YOU MUST HAVE BEEN PRACTICING ! NO 1ST LEMON COULD BE THIS GREAT! WHAT MAGIC DO YOU HAVE?

Massage greatness u

Update

That was hot!

Okay first of all, this was dead hot and just damn sexy. Second of all, HOW IS THIS YOUR FIRST LEMON? This is the best one I have ever read. Just... Wow... Goals... Anyways, super sexy storyline and great characterization.

You are seriously an awesome writer. I can' the live this was your first time writing a lemon scene because the way it was written... It had better detail then a lot that I have read yet it wasn't so much that it ruins it either. You should keep up the great work with your stories, I would love to see a oneshot sequel for the erotic massage and how it happens. */*

VERY good lemon! In fact, I would love another chapter...