Very effective point of view, and a tale well told.

awesome

I LOVE this story!

I did love the bonding. Great fic! Love the idea everyone wanting Danny back.

Oh my god it was so good**!

Sweet. You have the characters down well: Chin all Zen, Kono learning to deal, Steve stealing Danny's wallet to pay - the same way he takes over Danny's car -, Danny snarking about trying the doorknob... We'll done.

It was such a beautiful story... I am smiling right now! It was nice to read the story narrated by Chin. And Steve stealing Danny's wallet, really it was awesome. Love it!

Love Danny being call a "pint size Detective". And Steve just basically engulfing him when he hugs him since he is a bit bigger than Danny.
Wow Danny is sure well known and liked. But then found him alive and in good spirits.

I love Chin's perspective in this, and the tie in with his own family background and the hunting. The use of repetition works well to show how bad things are, and how hopeless everyone feels with Danny's disappearance. Everything works well together. Nice work.

Loved It :)

GREAT STORY!

HowEVER did I miss this? Perfectly portrayed Danny. Everything we miss this season with our core four.

Pure fluff made with all the good stuff - angsty team, worried SEAL, men on a mission - and best of all - whumped Danny. I won't complain if you feel the need to get off another short story before you feel right back on those rails.

just great!

Wow! Totally great story.