i wish Bella had done the same thing to Assward that she did to Victoria.

Peter and Char?

the wedgie of a lifetime, ha ha ha!

so Marcus has mated with Bella?

i read this before and i loved it, so here I go again!

Gotta be Peter

Thanks for writing this even through all the challenges that real life sent you.
I enjoyed the twists and turns you threw in there.

This was awesome! I loved every chapter.

Thank you for this treat!

Awesomeness. loved this story

YES! I was right in the end of the last chapter! It was Peter and Charlotte!

Is it Peter and Charolett (sorry if I didn't spell that right)?

Digging how these characters play out. I like this Leah better. She's much stronger in this. I hate Carlisle as evil, but in a good way. It's a case of him being one of my three favorite characters, though, nothing more. You did a great job with him, that is, as far as evil Carlisle. Then, there is Jasper. (sigh) His name is NOT complete without the sigh. (j/k) I'm glad you didn't make him evil. My heart wouldn't be able to take it. And Marcus has finally found happiness is a great idea. I think everyone deserves that chance and I felt the books and movies didn't do his character justice by denying him that. Great story. Thanks for sharing

really good story

You Absolutely did a Wonderful job writing this Awesome Story! WoW! I Loved Reading this so Much!

I enjoyed this story. Seeing Marcus find a new love is a welcome relief to his living without the one he lost a millennia ago. The relationship he has with Bella is very sweet and fun.

I like how you intertwined Leah, Emmett, and Jasper into this story as well.

The Cullens were quite an evil bunch though. Who would have thought Esme to be that sinister? ;)

While I know you wrote and posted this without a beta, there is one grammar item I would like to mention because the overuse of the word is a pet peeve of mine... therefore, I would like to suggest not using the word "that" so much. I admit, I too, didn't realize how much "that" worked its way into my writing until I would read over what I just wrote. In fact, the funny thing is, overuse of the word "that" was a reading pet peeve before I realized it worked its way into my writing also. Now, I work to eliminate its use not only in my writing, but also in my speaking. See, it's not just you. We all have something we need to work on, or learn to correct not only in writing, but in life too. :D