Reviews for Distance
I'm Still So Deep chapter 1 . 4/30/2016
This story had everything I was looking for: EdWin cuteness, passion, even a little bit of humor. This was also perfectly in character and so well-written. Great job; I LOVED it! ️️
Q-A the Authoress chapter 1 . 10/15/2015
And that's how their son was conceived. Just kidding but that's what I always say when they do it after FMA/Brotherhood is over. XD

Keep on Writin' and Rockin'
Art Witch - Aka Mizu chapter 1 . 8/13/2015
Oh wow the beginning was too hilarious cx This is so in character, making it a great read.
Otaku of Anime chapter 1 . 9/25/2014
Can you continue this story please? I really want to see more of this story.
LW12 chapter 1 . 7/19/2014
Very nice
GummyDrive chapter 1 . 7/13/2014
Hot damn! This could totally happen post brotherhood, especially with Al in Xing and... Well, yeah. Great oneshot!
NewCreature11111 chapter 1 . 5/29/2014
Not only was this a good story, but DAT LEMON! Dang!
Le Confidant chapter 1 . 4/25/2014
I enjoyed this quite a lot. Very unique way of writing the duo. I'm glad I'm stumbled into this fic.
Phenobarbital chapter 1 . 3/30/2014
I must commend you, I have read a lot of Edward and Winry fanfiction and have developed a dislike for the awful, unoriginal and inaccurate characterizations and story lines. But this was very good, the characters were very much as I'd imagine they might be in the beginning of their relationship, a little shy and inexperienced but not childish or clueless. The characters were also appropriately portrayed visually as in canon, Brotherhood ìs always best. This story was short and sweet and enjoyable.

Nice work.
Schisalda chapter 1 . 3/8/2014
Very good work! :)
jaclynkaileigh chapter 1 . 2/21/2014
Thank goodness, this is the first EdxWin fic I have read in a while, and I have to say this is exactly what I have been looking for. Well written, good emotion...thank you!
E.Wills chapter 1 . 2/10/2014
I think it's a shame that you don't have more reviews! So here's another positive one for you!

I love this story. I love your characterizations of both Ed and Winry- they were spot on. I was entertained by more than just the sex. Keep up the good work! You have a talent. :)
xoxInnerHollowxox chapter 1 . 1/6/2014
Great story!
toukarinluv4ever chapter 1 . 12/9/2013
Loved it. One of the best one shots out here. Nice and innocent. Keep up the amazing work.
ShadowAlchemist503 chapter 1 . 11/28/2013
This was totally in character and so well written! I'm honestly surprised it doesnt have more reviews for being so wrll written. Great job author, this was a really good EdWin one shot! Haha I giggled so much
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