Aww! Very simple and sweet! Their relationship is so precious and beautiful! I personally think that they make a great team. I just love how Aiden protects her like a big brother even though he's a tad bit mischievous...so adorable. :)

I love Aiden in this XD I love the realationship of Aiden and Jodie. Good Job. :)

that was a funny story and yes I enjoyed this story very much

Hey, cool story. I actually have the game and beaten it. It was so good! I was almost heart-broken when I thought Aiden was gone but that depends whatever way you played.

Please write more... It was a great story

OMG this is gold XD

you must do more!

That's so sweet! I haven't actually even bought the game (yet) but after watching gameplay of it, I fell in love with it, the relationship between Aiden and Jodie is just so nice and the game itself is beautiful...
And after reading this, I came to notice there's some really good fanfiction of it too :D

You did really good.

I LUV IT XD!

I luveth this! You should make moarrrr x3

Man... the game's ending is going to leave you in tears... (and then maybe smiling like mad if you make the right choices.)

Don't worry SakuraRose14, I'm starting to ship them together too XD

I loved the story! Thanks for being one of the first xD
Anyways, I love how you did this! It was amazingly done and I wish I could write as well as you :D
It it bad to say I'm already starting to ship Aiden and Jodie? xDD
While I love the friendship those two have between them, I can't help but be a hopeless romantic and push it farther xD
Ah well, keep up the good work and post more of these two! It'll be great, I know it :DD

I looooooooooooooooooove it sooooooo muuuuuuuuuuch! Seriously, it's fucking awesome! Thank the gods that someone out there is writing fanfics to this game!