Naruto was sort of obnoxious with his overconfidence. He kept laughing at everything and was way too sure of himself. It was hard to tell if he actually liked Sasuke or if the whole evening was a big joke to him, a night of fun where he got to check Sasuke off his list of people he wants to fuck. All the smirking, snickering, and annoying nicknames he kept giving Sasuke made it seem like he didn't take Sasuke seriously. Plus Naruto even made a comment about Sasuke being too drunk to fight back, so if he really liked Sasuke, he wouldn't have tried to take advantage of him when he was too drunk to give proper consent. Even worse, I think Naruto wanted Sasuke to be too drunk to give proper consent. Sasuke rejected Naruto when he was sober. I think Naruto's plan in buying Sasuke all those shots was to loosen him up to the point where he was drunk enough to say yes, which is a scummy thing to do. If Naruto really liked Sasuke, he wouldn't have done that. He also wouldn't have called Sasuke a "closet slut" when they were done. It's so disrespectful.

I really hoped Sasuke would fight him more, make Naruto prove himself. Sasuke gave in way too easily to what was a borderline assault at the club (you did say slight dub-con). If Sasuke had kept fighting, would Naruto have accepted the rejection, or would he have gotten violent and turned slight dub-con into full dub-con? I didn't like that Naruto manhandled Sasuke once again at the end of the fic, still smirking and being obnoxious even though he'd already gotten exactly what he wanted. I have the unfortunate feeling Sasuke would give in again. It would have been nice if Sasuke finally rejected him at the end. It's what Naruto deserved. He didn't deserve to have everything he wanted without having to work for it!

Hot.
I wish Sasuke could've been more into it, but to be fair you did say slight dub-con!
I wonder if he has more empathy for his friend Suigetsu and his "easy" lays now that he's been through it himself.

not a narusasu fan but still loved this so well done for making me enjoy a narusasu porno :)

One thing I'm sure of, if my mouth could get any drier while reading this it would have. Hot, hot oh so hot.

Dominate Naruto is hot...but I just felt like he thought it all was a joke in this story with the way he kept teasing and giggling to himself. Even when they were having sex. Plus, it is more interesting to see Sasuke go down after fighting, since I doubt he would just let anyone dominate him without making them prove themselves first.

It was well written though, other then that. The lyrics I ignored, since it wasn't like they were dancing to it.

Loooooove it

Love it! Wish you've continued.

Ohh god...that was awesome! Seriously I love all your stories but this one was just sooo damn good *.* I love the way you linked it with the song

Uuuuuuumffff, I LOVE YOUR STORIES! And ummph Naruto being the Seme is HELLA HOT _ Thx to you can't sleep now, my heart is out-of-control *3* *shiiveeeerrrss* THUMBS UP!

so hot!

I liked it:)))) keep the good work up...

EEKKK! I love it!
Sorry...No not really! XD
I really love it! I hope you continue writing stories I love SasuNaru And I like a dominant Naruto as well. XD

love it

This was pretty good. It was kind of wrong but it ended well and the scene you laid out was hot..

I fuckin loved this. It was nicely/ tastefully done. I would've like for this to kind of turn into dribbles, but this is great alone. Great job.