The best story I have read looking forward to the 2 chapter.

I was shocked when I saw this was updated. I honestly had to look at it again to make sure my eyes weren't deceiving me. I almost never see a fic that hasn't been touched in a while come back. I found it relatively recently so I wasn't left waiting long but still. I am surprised yet very happy. I loved the idea of this fic and was disappointed that I'd never be able to find out what happened. And it's nice that you're rewriting it, because it was a little amateurish. But that's how we all were when we were younger, so I don't blame you. It does look nicer now, if still a bit rushed and the thoughts not explained very thoroughly, but besides that it's good. Not trying to bash on it, just trying to give some constructive criticism. Anyways, can't wait to see this be updated and to see what happens next!

You're back! I'm pumped to see the next chapters!

I really enjoyed this rewritten version! Looking forward to the next update

Interesting concept! I really like what you're doing here!

This is looking really good!
Can't wait to see where you take this XD
Can't wait for an update XD

Oooh this is interesting!

What an interesting concept!

update soon please!

I'm curious as to what Ed's part is in this, good story so far!

And so the story is born, but will it walk, and will it eventually run? It is all up to you Author-sama!

:3 Eddie be creepin'. He's a creeper.

Really, really good so far! I loved how you wrote the other characters' reactions to Ed's death; they were extremely in character, and I can see this happening. I 'm intrigued, and I can't wait to see where you're going to take this!

I like this story a lot! The grammar and flow is very good, but the format is lacking a bit. Just things like putting "abc" instead of 'abc' or putting a space between each paragraph. Very good though, and a few changes and updates away from being great!

Me likey. :3 interesting concept. I was expecting more of a reaction from Roy, though. First his best friend dies and now his youngest subordinate? He'd be devastated.