I really enjoyed your story! I think we all love a good bad-boy, and you did a great job of keeping him mischievous and bad without making him psychotic, like others I have read. I enjoyed seeing Killian as a father. His over-protectiveness since he was worried his daughter was like him at that age was great - and he was right to be concerned. I absolutely loved the end with Emma being all-knowing.

it was good

It's Henry! The mysterious captain has to be Henry at this point, he's the only one of the original people who faced Pan other than Neal, Regina, and Rumplestilskin than isn't on the island yet and I don't think any of the others are the mysterious captain! It's gotta be Henry. (I already know there are more chapters that have been posted so it's probably already been revealed but I just wanted to give my guess before I find out for sure)

OMG that's amazing. It's currently 12:59am and I stayed up on a school night to read this. Will you teach me in your amazing FanFiction ways?

OMG! I just finished this at one in the morning and it is soooo great. Loved the ending. Keep up your writing skills. Thank you!

Superb writing, truly. You mastered one of the hardest parts of fan-fiction writing, which is to get the voice of the characters correct. Yours is the best Pan story I've read and I know I'll be back for repeated readings. The pacing was good, and I love the way you put lines in to define when the scenes changed. Elizabeth was just spoiled enough to not seem too perfect, so she felt real, but badass enough to be fun! You are very talented. Thank you for sharing your imagination and gift of writing with us all.

Man I was so hopping you added an extra epilogue to the end or was letting us know you were starting a third story line for Peter and Lizzie-just so you know I think there would be some extremely happy fans if you did either one-me included! Thanks for both of you stories though I read them as you wrote them and then went back and reread them pretty recently. Thank you for sharing your writing!

I read this and I can only think of one word to describe it...WOW! It was really good! I think it would be really cool if you did a sequel or if not a sequel do like a one shot of Lizzie and Peter's wedding or Killian finding out about Peter and Lizzie. That would be really cool and something that I would totally read!

Loved it! Great job!

Oh Gods Bless Emma. That was bloody brilliant that was. I read this final chapter at five in the morning and I quite literally was shoving my fist in my mouth to keep myself from laughing out loud. I wish this story hadn't of ended, I adore Peter and Elizabeth. Peter is by far my favorite villain. I mean Rumpelstiltskin and Hook are my favorite male characters but I don't count them as villains, so Peter wins by a landslide. I loved reading this story, it's my top favorite PeterXOC, and it was phenomenal. Unlike anything I've read before. :3

You should write another chapter other wise I love it so so much

cool

Ahhhhhhhh! I just now read this whole story and OH MY GOSH. IT IS SO AMAZING I LOVE IT SO SO SO MUCH! Awesome job :D it was absolutely fantastic! Definitely one of my favorite fanfics I've ever read!

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It took me the longest time to read this, because I was iffy about a futuristic fic. however, you wrote it absolutely gorgeously, and I can't thank you enough for that. Hope you have a marvelous day :-)