I was in such a happy little world and then BAM! That was just mean... Very very mean. You have succeeded as a writer. You made me cry. Congratulations. It was beautiful!

I really liked this. Favorite line: "Everything's alright as long as I got you."

Oh I hope that was REAL! The picnic part! Lovely long chapter (oh how I wish the word "complete" wasn't there)! A great read!

This was amazing! Tears in my eyes!

as he drove out of the parking lot and smiled to might not be exactly sure where they were now, or where they might go in the future, all he knew right now was that he was with Juliet and that was all that mattered.*****Beautiful ending there - made me smile :D