Reviews for Outsider
MBLMA chapter 7 . 4/8/2019
OMG1!
Guest chapter 1 . 1/29/2017
This is wonderful! Incredibly engaging. Reflects all of the characters' lesser explored traits. I hope you return to this one day.
fangurlsrule chapter 7 . 9/13/2015
Damn vegeta is such a tease. Poor bulma and vegeta, so lonely compared to everyone else. I dont really like yamchabut I am hsppy you didnt turn him into a major jerk.
springandbysummerfall chapter 7 . 10/28/2014
I'm dying a little inside because this isn't finished. I checked your wordpress but it's set to private. Your writing is lovely-I would love it if you picked up where you left off.
skysignal chapter 7 . 6/4/2014
I really, really like this story, and I hope you still update it. This is very close to what I'd figured how Bulma and Vegeta got together-it was all in what Mirai Trunks had mentioned. Please, do continue this project!
Red Swingline Stapler chapter 7 . 4/29/2014
I really need you to update this story soon! I want to know what happens next!
Red Swingline Stapler chapter 6 . 4/29/2014
Bulma's mother as "perceptive"? Well that is certainly a new concept. Great chapter yet again.
Red Swingline Stapler chapter 5 . 4/29/2014
Ahhh! Why would you do that? They were so close!
Red Swingline Stapler chapter 4 . 4/29/2014
You could cut the sexual tension with a knife! Well done!
Red Swingline Stapler chapter 3 . 4/29/2014
I said I would ration the chapters, but I cannot help myself. This chapter was excellent. I cannot wait to read chapter 4!
Red Swingline Stapler chapter 2 . 4/29/2014
Very interesting chapter. I am surprised by Vegeta's respect for Bulam's lab. Most stories would have him act quite differently.
Red Swingline Stapler chapter 1 . 4/27/2014
Love it! Can't wait to read more!
Nelicquele79 chapter 7 . 2/3/2014
Damn! This story is fantastic!
Gw chapter 1 . 1/15/2014
I love your story. Please continue and update soon :)!
pickle-o8024 chapter 7 . 1/10/2014
I feel like i need to review this story to plead with you to KEEP WRITING! You have a beautiful writing style and your take on vegeta and bulma, especially, are not only believable but exactly how i would see Love it! Please continue!
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