I know it’s unlikely you’ll ever finish any of these great stories or even read this message but If you’re ever inclined could you at least give us a plot outline so we can know where these stories would have gone. Maybe one day someone will be inspired by these stories to have a crack at finishing them themselves, it would be nice to know what you’re intentions were for the stories.

I really wish you had continued this story. I'm watching the Battle of Britain right now and would love to read your take on how the Turians would react to all the changes in tides during the war. Also how they react to the war speeches of the leaders of WW2.

I can't believe you never went further than two chapters with this story. The potential of seeing the citadel races react to the twists and turns of events in WWII is very intriguing. Actually, it's a shame you've never completed any of your stories. They're clearly we written, but all too short and unfinished. Here, if you don't stray too far from historical events, half the plot is written for you and still it's left abandoned.

Is this story being continued? This has alot of promise.

will they be more to this story

Very interesting start.

Plz continue XD

I would like to see their reactions to the atomic bombings of hiroshima and nagisaki as well as ww2

very good this is unique and i would like to see how it peogresses

I've just realized this but won't the Asari witness Hiroshima and Nagasaki? Which could cause them to write the humans off as a compatible race. Interesting, also, I know that you haven't updated since December but as you haven't said that you've abandoned this I'm following and hoping for more.

For the digust abiut use of nuclear weapons, I'm sure that contrary to the politicians and mundane people, some scientists will understand that a specie as a whole cannot understand their danger and horror before using some of them. Some individuals can, but not the majority, they have to see to understand. And for the Concil races to ban them means that they used them in the past. And probably destroyed one ecosystem or two.

Really? WW2? That's kinda lame. Oh well. God bless America, and Germany.

Pretty great idea for a story and also very well written. There's a very real life feel to what you've written. I could almost taste the air on the Pyjak homeworld.

Are you continuing? I'll be following regardless.

Not a very believable british couple for the time.

Interesting idea having th Asari observe humanitiy's development across the 20th century. The Asari are so slow as well that they could easily expect to wait centuries before having to make contact.

Good stuff more please