This is a decent fic but making him fall in love with someone who understands his pain just to kill her to give him the Mangekyo to further the plot is stupid.

Nice story.

if naruto has the mangekyou, why he didint use the Tsukuyomi or Amaterasu to defend himself in the forest?

can you give me the story for adoption. I want to continue it. it has good plot.

In the end because of Sasuke, Naruto achieved the power of Itachi. Actually I think Itachi would've given Naruto a hug.

Hold it, since Shisui, Naruto's uncle is dead, doesn't that mean that once he gains the third tomoe, Naruto will gain the mangekyo from his grief?

Damn here i was happy about reading new chapter. I don't think it was bad. Hope your new story can gain good interest.

Fucking 9-pointed jackass man. Why do people always try to find a faggier sharingan design than Sasuke's faggoty one. It's always "NO I"M THE MORE SPECIALER ONE, UN!" And then the faggotry starts in full. Like Sasuke having a full bar instead of a single 8th note on his Oto headband. I really see why you had to quite this because it really is a cliché. Even for an Austrian.

Dunno if it was already pointed but really. Stop with the exclametions sign !
I feel like im reading Might Gai

ok

Interesting... But Oji-san means old man. Nice job.. Looking forward to more..

Damn trouble all around. Hope they got out soon. So when are Naruto and Kurotsuchi goning to meet. Hope he soon gain some happy moment.
I hope you will get some energy back to write the story even if it's been a year since your last update.

Finally the awaited forest of death. Hope they got out easily haha which is not possible with all those iwa genin teams.

Finally Kakashi gets serious and Haku no ken, a good weapon idea there.

So Kakashi tells his story to Naruto. It's good to know this fic won't turn Harem.