Wow you are super talented

That was great. I knew it. I knew that Claudia was going to put Sykes in the Bronzer. I like how they all had a group hug with Harper. It was sweet. And I also like how when Harper said that she wanted a cookie that Pete immediately went to get the cookie jar. He is still a child trapped in an adult's body. And now that this story is all over do you have plans to write another story?

That was great. Harper definitely has Claudia's firey spirit. If Sykes is already walking on his own two feet then why would he need the bracelet? I'm glad that Claudia and Steve were able to stop him even if it was kind of easy. I think I know what idea Claudia has to do with Sykes and his henchmen and now I need to read the next chapter to see if I'm right. I'm just sad that the next chapter is the final chapter.

That was great. I'm a little surprised that Claudia and Steve didn't explain to Harper about when Sykes first killed Steve. But then again they never thought that Sykes would come back to life and try to get revenge on them. I just hope that Sykes doesn't try to hurt Harper in any way. I also have a feeling that Harper can be true to her word and can actually kill Sykes.

That was great. I'm a little nervous about where Sykes is taking Harper. I like seeing Steve's flashback memory of Harper's first day of school. That was sweet. And at least Claudia and Artie were able to find Steve. That leaves them with one less person that they need to worry about.

That was great. Harper's plan was good if only she could have succeeded. I guess that Sykes knew that she would try to escape through the window in the bathroom at some point since he was able to recapture her. And then with how close Steve is with Harper its understandable that he's gone rogue. Its just like Claudia did when she used the metronome to bring him back to life.

That was great. Its sweet that Artie is still able to help Claudia even though she is now the caretaker. The bull horn that Claudia yelled into sounds interesting. I wish that there was an artifact like it on the show. I'm also really interested in it is possible that Walter Sykes came back from the dead. But it also explains why he would want revenge on Claudia and Steve.

That was great. I should have guessed that it was Walter Sykes that took Harper, but I thought like Claudia, Harper, and Steve in that Sykes is already dead. I'm a little worried about what it is that Sykes needs Harper for. If the warehouse is reacting to Harper's emotions from being kidnapped, then things should possibly start to go haywire or something now that Claudia has fallen apart.

Wow. I'm trying to figure out who the blonde haired guy who said he knew Claudia and Steve could be but I am coming up blank. When everyone else finds out that he took Harper the guy is going to wish that he hadn't. And for more than one reason.

That was great. I feel sorry for Harper having to live the troubled life of a teenager. So I'm guessing Claudia's and Steve's attempt at having another child didn't work? Its a little weird to see Claudia as the caretaker instead of Mrs Frederic. But it should also be interesting.

Love it! I just absolutely love this story to pieces. I'm sad to see it end... Keep up the great work! I'll be anxiously awaiting your next story.

Awww so sweet, is it finished or are you going to write more?

I just fanfic stalked the hell out of these passed two stories. And that um. Other one. But still, your an amazing writer, I like the plot in the story and I like that Harper wasn't a quiter and a lot like her mom. I expect a last chapter though, something to wrap it up real tight so the story ends.

I absolutely love this story! I've followed it since the beginning, and it has been very fun to read. I think that how you write Claudia is how she would be at that age. Steve too, although I think he would be a bit more opinionated, especially after years of working with Claudia. Just a thought though.

Can't wait for the next chapter.