This was so heart wrenching . The writing was really good! And Scars personality seemed really authentic

Despite the fact that Scar is still planning fratricide and the death of Simba despite the touching moment, this is a very well thought out story and I like it . Well done you.

So sweet. I love the interaction between these two. But why does it have them inside brackets? Are they in a romantic relationship...?

Wow. I think they should have used that in the movie! Serious I do.

Hey, long time, no see, huh? *waves*

In any case, I found this by freak accident... I haven't been getting any alert emails/review emails/PM notices or *anything* from FFn, really. I just happened to be scrolling through and the summary caught my eye, and then I saw who wrote it and I was like "Oooh! Bonus!" lol

I think that happened with your last one shot also. I hope I'm not the only one with this problem. -.-'

So you'll be writing one-shots to improve your writing skills? Cool. I'm in support of that. :3 Best of luck!

I think the only thing I would point out for this one is that a lot of the dialogue and such for the scene was borrowed for the movie, and it was pretty short. But there wasn't much you could do about that, and I liked the parts you added in, as well as the alternation between Scar and Simba's contrasting thoughts. I feel really bad, actually, knowing that Simba looked up to his uncle in such a way, and you did a good job of highlighting his good qualities through the cub's eyes. A shame that his uncle will end up being responsible for all the pain he goes through, and that he will find out one day. :/ Totally sucks.

Anyways, I hope to see you again soon! I don't know if you published this from your computer or if it's still having issues... but if it is, then no worries. This was a pleasant surprise nonetheless. :D

Faved.

Twin :)

Here's how I can describe this: Read the second half while listening to "The Black Gate Opens" from Return of the King, starting at the 1 minute mark.

Tear jerking, isn't it?

Nice, I was expecting a happier resolution. But this was too well written and too interesting not to love.
Great work!