Reviews for Chemistry
wardlyman chapter 1 . 6/28
She is very shallow person. Once she sees he piercing and tattoos, now she wants to ride his dick.. Honestly, I don't see their relationship lasting long. Cause him having those doesn't change who he is as a person... Whom she deemed to nice and don't have chemistry with.
TennesseeCaliforniaGuy chapter 1 . 6/25
So Bella sees he got tatoos and is instantly trying to fuck hiM?

Why write her like this... Makes her seem shallow. Well, she IS shallow.
WritingMiss8 chapter 1 . 3/10
This was such a cute story. I'm proud of Bella and sad for Edward because she kept rejecting him. Awe. But he seems happy now.
BoredV87 chapter 1 . 6/11/2019
I have to say I dont really care for Bella in this one, it's very well written but she seems more shallow and off putting than she's normally written. there's nothing wrong with that and I know sadly this type of relationship is rather common but I have to say this is one of the few stories I've come across where I dont really like the person shes made out to be.
Sam 'Dimples' Swarek chapter 1 . 11/22/2018
I lived this. I think there should be another one
apersonsmusings chapter 1 . 7/31/2018
Edward deserved better. I can’t help but think that a breakup is imminent in their future once Bella gets used to the whole “oh-Edward-has-tattoos-and-is-pierced-wow” thing. She seems really shallow. Hope Edward finds someone who actually likes him for who he is in this universe.
xoxocullenluverxoxo chapter 1 . 6/13/2018
Aww they are so cute!
JayNahNah chapter 1 . 5/29/2018
Cute
claud9z chapter 1 . 5/20/2018
this story! Wish there was more!
starsmina chapter 1 . 4/3/2018
I read this when it was going to be in the contest and really liked it, glad I found it again!
shannon30033 chapter 1 . 12/25/2017
Thanks!
ChristyWIX chapter 1 . 7/30/2017
It didn't take him taking off his shirt, it took him ignoring her when she was trying to figure him out. I don't see these two lasting. She's too all over the place with how she feels he isn't good enough, then suddenly he is. His heart is going to be broken.
orchidluv chapter 1 . 4/9/2017
She's kinda shallow. She thinks it's because of chemistry but she doesn't want him cuz he's too nice? But then suddenly she's all over him? hmm.
Ms Torres chapter 1 . 9/6/2016
Lol Edward so should have ditched her indecisive ass. Bella was so hot and cold it was hard to keep up with her rambling half the time. Either way was an incredibly enjoyable and laugh worthy read. Thanks.

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three colors chapter 1 . 12/19/2015
What a great story ! Thank you!
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