Reviews for Lightning |
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something-siriusly-wrong chapter 4 . 6/22 Tom is really fucking scary |
Cupcakekitten1 chapter 18 . 4/14 Pls pls update...this seems to be turning into one of the best fanfic's i read... |
entarielle chapter 4 . 7/16/2019 hello, just a question, why did you say that there is only two bed ? before you said there is three |
Cinthya chapter 18 . 4/5/2019 I would be waiting for youuuuu ouuuuuuuu |
Itsupiki Okami chapter 18 . 3/27/2019 I love the story so far and I cannot wait to see Harry try to break free from Tom, maybe even run away and hide for a while before Tom finds him but I also do love Harry being meek as that is what would be expected since Harry came from an abusive household to a crappy orphanage. There he finally made some friends who turned on him but one person didn't, Tom, so for the people who do not understand Harry being meek, you haven't had traumatic experiences like the ones Harry had. Benevolence Black, I hope you are doing great and will update this story soon but I understand, as a full time college student and full time working, that it can be difficult in life to balance everything. |
Anonymous chapter 18 . 2/14/2019 PLEASE UPDATE! |
The-Midnight-Fae chapter 18 . 6/7/2018 Loved this! I really like how you're writing this. Your style is nice to read(so if you publish a book please let me know.) I like how you've directed the the story. The twist and turns were amazing, And I think the time skips where very well written. They made sense and was pleasing to read. Also I just wanted to ask if you're still interested in this story, because this is the bomb. Good luck with Life! Bye |
lizyeh2000 chapter 18 . 4/12/2018 Love your story now following! . Please update soon! |
cinhtay chapter 18 . 2/15/2018 i will be waiting for youuuuuu |
xrysatsan chapter 18 . 2/2/2018 PLEASE NEXXXXXTTTTTTT |
SasuNaru's Loyal Fangirl TDDUP chapter 1 . 1/29/2018 I'll be waiting for your next update. Maybe if books and happenings didn't make me forget |
SasuNaru's Loyal Fangirl TDDUP chapter 18 . 1/29/2018 I don't believe in destiny or fate written in the stars whatever that is. |
Gwen Zenier chapter 18 . 1/11/2018 Love it. From the dark and sadistic Tom and Harry. Hope he grows a backbone. That would be interesting... But I love it. |
mukmuk214 chapter 18 . 12/28/2017 This has to be one of the best books I've read on this site, keep up the good work. |
Guest chapter 4 . 11/3/2017 Seriously I thought Harry already had a bed and suddenly there's only 2 beds. Please get ur story straight. Other than a few other mistakes d plotline is pretty good. Keep it going |